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[求助] 这个意见算是大修还是小修呢?好还是坏呢? 已有2人参与

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Reviewer #2: Preparation and characterization of <gamma>-AlOOH @CS magnetic nanoparticle as a novel adsorbent for removing fluoride from drinking water.

This manuscript could be interesting if the discussion is completed and done properly.
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Abstract
It is not clear the paragraph "Based on the results of kinetic and isotherm models, the fluoride adsorption on the ACMN may involve electrostatic adsorption and a complexation; the fluoride ion on the ACMN's surface was heterogeneous"
The fluoride ion is heterogeneous? What does it mean?

Page 2, line 39
"…material to because…?

Please give the experimental conditions in detail (for example the concentrations of fluoride for the isotherms).

Why was the concentration of the competing anions 2 mmol/L?

Units should be unified through the manuscript.

The equilibrium pH should be given through the manuscript.

Adsorption kinetics
Linear and non-linear equations were used, why?

The results should be discussed properly, for example data were adjusted to Langmuir, Freundlich and Langmuir-Freundlich equations. The first one is for homogeneous materials and the others for heterogeneous materials. It is not possible to have at the same time both characteristics in the same material. Then, for example, the statement of page 14, lines 48-49 is wrong.

There is not discussion on the results obtained at different temperatures and the thermodynamic parameters should be calculated with these results.
审稿人给了这样的意见,算是大修还是小修呢?
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saito1991: 金币+5 2014-11-18 18:04:11
不算大修,但是也得好好回答,比小修多那么点!感觉还是有戏!楼主加油~!
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This manuscript could be interesting if the discussion is completed and done properly.
从这句话中感觉吧,肯定算不上小修,估计审稿人认为你的讨论部分太少了,既不详细又不深入,好好改改再看他第二次意见吧。
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
大修小修不重要,关键是你现在要彻底修改完善,这样才能接收
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