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islestar

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[求助] 大家帮忙看看这篇文章还有改得必要吗?

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Reviewer: 1
Comments to the Author
The authors performed meta-analyses of the survivals after radio-frequent ablation and surgical resection for hepatocellular carcinomas within Milan criteria. The main finding of their review was increased local control rate by hepatic resection with improved disease-free survivals. Unfortunately, similar reviews or meta-analysis were already published in the literatures as the followings. Moreover, the discussion of this article is very poor with only 3 references.
#1. Please make the discussion more concise with referring previous reviews and show how this analysis is different from the previous ones.
#2. The backgrounds of the patients need to be compared between the RFA and surgery.
1. Tiong L, Maddern GJ. Systematic review and meta-analysis of survival and disease recurrence after radiofrequency ablation for hepatocellular carcinoma.Br J Surg. 2011 Sep;98(9):1210-24.
2. Liu JG, Wang YJ, Du Z.Radiofrequency ablation in the treatment of small hepatocellular carcinoma: a meta analysis. World J Gastroenterol. 2010 Jul 21;16(27):3450-6.
3. Zhou Y, Zhao Y, Li B, Xu D, Yin Z, Xie F, Yang J. Meta-analysis of radiofrequency ablation versus hepatic resection for small hepatocellular carcinoma. BMC Gastroenterol. 2010 Jul 9;10:78.
4. Xu G, Qi FZ, Zhang JH, Cheng GF, Cai Y, Miao Y. Meta-analysis of surgical resection and radiofrequency ablation for early hepatocellular carcinoma. World J Surg Oncol. 2012 Aug 16;10:163.


Reviewer: 2
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This is a systematic review of RCTs and non-RCTs comparing survival and disease recurrence rates after surgical resection or radiofrequency ablation for hepatocellular carcinoma within the Milan criteria.
This study has a few drawbacks.
1) As the authors stated in the Results section, the 4 RCTs had moderate methodological quality, with a mean Jadad score of 2.75. The quality of reporting with a Jadad score below 3 is categorized as poor. Therefore, the systematic review analyzing such RCTs as well as non-RCTs lacks quality.
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wellyy2005

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
别人已经发表过类似文献;所以你要大改才有可能获得认可的。
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islestar

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2楼: Originally posted by wellyy2005 at 2013-05-11 08:48:30
别人已经发表过类似文献;所以你要大改才有可能获得认可的。

如何大改呢?对文章的内容吗
3楼2013-05-11 09:43:20
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islestar

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能给我提点建议吗?这篇文章纳入文献比之前的多一些,分析的内容差不多,如何才能与之前的文章不同呢?
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islestar: 金币+20, 有帮助 2013-05-11 19:12:16
既然走到这一步,坚持下去。调整与别人重复的内容
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还是改一改吧,好歹付出了
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luyuan0920

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经鉴定,没有发表的必要了,鸡肋!
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