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[交流] 第一次SCI,大修意见如何改???

Reviewer Comments:
Reviewer #2 Evaluations:
RECOMMENDATION: Major Revision
Sufficient New Physics in an Applied Area: No
Appropriate Length: Yes
Well Organized and Clearly Written: Yes
Good Title: Yes
Good Abstract: Yes
Clear Figures: Yes
Adequate References: No
TECHNICAL QUALITY RATING: Marginal
PRESENTATION RATING: Marginal

Reviewer #2 (Comments to the Author):

This work presents results from MD simulations of shock compressed aluminum crystals using an EAM potential. As it stands, the manuscript does not appear to contain much new, physical data, if any at all. Therefore, I am compelled to reject it in its present form.

The major issue with the work is that a quick literature search indicates that EAM models were used to study aluminum under shock compression some time ago. I refer the authors to the following three references, just as examples:

1. Belashchenko et al., High Temperature, 49, 656, 2011.
2. Kuksin et al., INTERNATIONAL JOURNAL OF FRACTURE, 162, 127, 2010.
3. Horstemeyer et al., THEORETICAL AND APPLIED FRACTURE MECHANICS, 37, 49, 2001.

For example, Reference #1 discusses an EAM model of aluminum under shock loading up to 260 GPa and 11500 K. Reference #2 discusses the effect of microstructure in the Al crystal on its material strength properties. In addition, Al under high pressure-temperature conditions has been the subject of an enormous number of quantum simulation efforts. As a result, it's not clear if Figs.1-4 of the paper are supplying the reader with any new physical information that wasn't already available in the open literature. Any revision of this paper would require a more serious review of the available data on Al under shock loading, especially concerning MD simulation.

The last figure (Fig. 5) might provide some new physical insight. However, the spherical voids used in the defect simulations sound ludicrously large. In addition, it's not clear that this issue wasn't already studied in at least one of the references I mentioned above. This effort also needs to be justified better if it is going to be part of the manuscript.

Third, Fig. 5 is confusing and the x-axis might be mislabeled.
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2楼: Originally posted by zguiming at 2013-05-08 11:18:25
按照审稿人的意思,逐条逐条回复啊!给你大修,好好修改,基本上就能中了!提前恭喜啦

看着第一条意见好像很重要,大概是说没有新的物理信息,是不是再多查找一些新的实验或计算结果和我的结果比较,就可以了?
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MDeFF2012: 金币+1 2013-05-08 12:44:29
按照审稿人的意思,逐条逐条回复啊!给你大修,好好修改,基本上就能中了!提前恭喜啦
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3楼: Originally posted by MDeFF2012 at 2013-05-08 11:21:59
看着第一条意见好像很重要,大概是说没有新的物理信息,是不是再多查找一些新的实验或计算结果和我的结果比较,就可以了?...

的确第一条很重要,给你定调了,所以你一定要仔细阅读文献,在多加点新的东西,说明你的工作的重要意义啊
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