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[求助] 请大家帮帮忙，看看这是个什么状态，我应该怎么做-第三次修改了

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to Chemical Engineering Science.

Although the Editor is happy with the revision in terms of scientific content, it is clear that the quality of the language is not good enough to allow for publication on CES. The authors are encouraged to get help from a professional or from the Elsevier editorial services (http://webshop.elsevier.com/languageediting/).
You can find the manuscript record listed under "Submissions Needing Revisions". Click "Revise" to submit your revision. (If you have forgotten your password, please click the "Forget your password" link located on the log-in screen.)

When submitting your revised paper, please include the following:

1) A separate document uploaded as "Response to Reviews" that carefully addresses the issues raised in the below comments, point by point. You should also include a suitable rebuttal to any specific request for change that has not been made.

2) A marked version (changes highlighted/marked) of your manuscript, which should be uploaded as a "Marked Revision". The clean, unmarked version usable for printing purposes should be uploaded as the "Manuscript".

When submitting your revised manuscript, please ensure that you upload the source files (e.g. Word). Uploading only a pdf file at this stage will create delays should your manuscript finally be accepted for publication. If your revised submission does not include the source files, we will contact you to request them.

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seapass: 金币+1, 鼓励应助！ 2013-03-04 10:21:25
Kathy2011: 金币+2 2013-03-04 13:20:38
编辑觉得语言还是得大改哈，最好是找个熟悉你这个领域的熟人（母语为英语的最好）帮忙改改，要不就找润色公司了，不过前者靠谱些
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Kathy2011: 金币+1 2013-03-04 13:20:47
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找润色公司吧，语言问题。

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就是语言得再组织下，再修改下，然后再投，祝好
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Kathy2011: 金币+1 2013-03-04 13:21:04
就是想让你多发些钱，找个师兄师姐改下就是了
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Kathy2011: 金币+1 2013-03-04 13:21:10
好好修改英语表达，有希望
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Kathy2011: 金币+5 2013-03-05 08:45:16
Although the Editor is happy with the revision in terms of scientific content, it is clear that the quality of the language is not good enough to allow for publication on CES. The authors are encouraged to get help from a professional or from the Elsevier editorial services (http://webshop.elsevier.com/languageediting/).

虽然编辑认为楼主文章的学术性已经达到要求了，但貌似楼主的文章还需要润色语言，可以使用elsevier的润色服务。

1) A separate document uploaded as "Response to Reviews" that carefully addresses the issues raised in the below comments, point by point. You should also include a suitable rebuttal to any specific request for change that has not been made.

要求楼主单独上传"Response to Reviews"文档，在文档中详细地列出审稿意见，逐条回复。此外，楼主也可以对于一些未按照要求所做的修改给出合适的解释。

2) A marked version (changes highlighted/marked) of your manuscript, which should be uploaded as a "Marked Revision". The clean, unmarked version usable for printing purposes should be uploaded as the "Manuscript".

楼主需要提交标注后的修改稿，以"Marked Revision"的类型上传，未标注的修改稿必须以 "Manuscript"的类型上传。
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Kathy2011: 金币+56 2013-03-05 08:45:21
建议你找http://webshop.elsevier.com/languageediting/修改英文。
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