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[求助] Surface and Coatings Technology 外审意见 major revision 帮我看看有希望不?

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Dear Dr. **,

Reviewers have now commented on your paper.
Followling the advice of reviewer 2 I was considering to reject and recommend another journal. I still would like to encourage you to consider that option. Otherwise, please provide solid answers to the reviewers remarks.

For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.

If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript. THE CHANGES AND MODIFICATIONS OF THE MANUSCRIPT SHOULD BE HIGHLIGTHED IN COLOUR THROUGH THE TEXT OF THE REVISED MANUSCRIPT.

You are expected to return your Revision by 10 May 2013.

Yours sincerely,

Surface and Coatings Technology

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1:
Comments to Author:  

two minor revisions are suggested

1. In page 5, para 2, there is a sudden appearance of word 'prickly ball'; I understand it is for the undissolved Cr3C2 carbide, but there is no mention about it in the test to confirm that what author meant as 'prickly ball' is the partially dissoved Cr3C2

2. The conclusion appears to be reproduction of the results; it is not 'concluding' your work. It can be rewritten with more impact so the 'conclusions' are clear and obvious.

Reviewer #2: This is formally well written work with good thermodynamics analysis. However, in my opinion this work is not in the main scope of present journal. There is no novelty in the experimental part and thermodynamics analysis would better pass in some other journal like Materials Chemistry and Physics. I could not see the connection between experimental and theoretical investigations.


*        Highlights and conclusions do not make clear the novelty of this research. Highlight 1 and 4 bring the same information.
*        I can't agree with conclusions part in the introduction. Formation of M7C3 carbides in Fe-based matrixes is well known process, also industrially established for more than 30 years.
*        It is also not clear what is the link between calculations and experimental observations? How the dissolving of Cr3C2 does influence the nucleation behaviour?

General remarks:
*        What was the vol. % of Cr3C2 powder in relation to matrix FeCrNiBSi powder?
*        I would not name Cr3C2 as "substrate", maybe a "source". Usually in coatings "substrate" means a base material to be coated.
*        Which way were the powders deposited - pasta, mixed together or separately?
*        If the main idea of this research was to analyse formation of M7C3 from Cr3C2 I would suggest to use pure Ni or Fe as matrix and to look on a simple system. By the used matrix composition high amount alloying elements influences the reaction processes.
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多数论文都是修改后才能录用的。好好修改,希望很大。

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修改后接收的希望比较大
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botar: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-09 22:01:44
首先,给修改意见就意味着接受概率很大了;
其次,审稿人2提的意见很尖锐,特别是开篇的那段话,直接说没有创新点,以及不适合在本刊物发表。针对这个问题,楼主要引经据典,要举出实例,说明你现在的研究适合在这个刊物上发表,并明确说明你用了什么新的方法等解决了什么科学问题,这个可以说是创新点。
至于其他的问题,都是细节性的问题了,应该不是很难。
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botar: 金币+5 2013-02-09 22:02:22
第一个审稿人给了小修,第二个审稿人认为工作做得不错,但与期刊的专业偏好不符,建议改投。如果楼主能够令人信服地回答审稿人特别是第二个审稿人的意见,证明文章与期刊专业偏好契合,而且做出到位的修改,接收的希望还是很大的。

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botar: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-09 22:02:41
关键是满足审稿人2的要求。
如果把他说服了,就接受了。

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按照审稿人意见好好修改,接受希望很大。

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修改后录用可能大,注意突出你的创新点

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直接接收的文章很少,多数文章都是修改后才录用的。
认真修改,希望很大。

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2楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2013-02-09 11:33:12
多数论文都是修改后才能录用的。好好修改,希望很大。

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3楼: Originally posted by paperhunter at 2013-02-09 12:17:42
第一个审稿人给了小修,第二个审稿人认为工作做得不错,但与期刊的专业偏好不符,建议改投。如果楼主能够令人信服地回答审稿人特别是第二个审稿人的意见,证明文章与期刊专业偏好契合,而且做出到位的修改,接收的希 ...

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4楼: Originally posted by hgdljh at 2013-02-09 13:59:02
revise your paper seriously according to reviewers\' comments,放心,一般没问题的,直接accepted的paper很少的

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