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kongfeng87

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[交流] 外审意见回来了,应该是major revise。想让大家看看,有多大机会录用 已有29人参与

外审意见回来了,应该是大修。想让大家看看,有多大机会
主编意见:On the basis of these reviews and my own reading, I am sorry to conclude that the manuscript is not in a shape in which it can be published in xxxxxxxxx. Yet, if you feel that you can address my points and the reviewers' points in a satisfying way,I encourage you to revise your manuscript.
If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript.
Reviewer #1: Overall, the text would benefit greatly from a revision by a native English speaker as there are still many grammatical problems with the manuscript, which make it difficult to follow. In particular, please change all sentences with the structure 'no any ?  to 'no' only. Please use past tense throughout and check your prepositions.
Although the findings are important and interesting the manuscript still needs work to improve clarity and language.
Reviewer #2:The authors addressed an important issue using an interesting design. The results are new and interesting. However, at the moment the paper has several shortcomings that need to be revised (see comments). One important weakness of the paper is the language. The introduction and discussion need further revision in order to improve the readability of the paper. Additionally, the rationale of Experiment 1 needs to be elaborated (see comment). In summary, although design and results are interesting the MS needs a substantial revision before publication.

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猪会飞(金币+1): 鼓励交流 2011-05-05 21:43:49
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主要说的是语言的问题呀,正面评价有。
我觉得好好修改机会很大。
刚刚修改完一篇,几乎相当于重新写了一遍。
很煎熬,有几天通宵。

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xiaoyu1014126

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英语表达不行啊!花钱请润色公司彻底润色下吧
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猪会飞(金币+2): 鼓励交流 2011-05-05 21:44:24
这个你的仔细修改,不着急提交
一定亲自修改好了,让别人也看舒服了,才提交
对以后也有帮助

开始写英语文章总是有点困难的,慢慢的习惯就好了
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猪会飞(金币+1): 鼓励交流 2011-05-05 21:44:32
这种情况,好好修改,投回去。没有选择,不是内容问题,语言问题太大,投别的也一样(可能还不给你机会)。
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按照要求好好修改了的话,应该没有什么问题。恭喜!
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改完了问题不大
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