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寄稿SCI遭受沉重打击   。。。下面是回复：Referee: This paper really needs to be proof read by an English native or by someone fluent in English, because the number of grammatical errors is huge. 我只能回: Sorry for our poor English. We have tried our best to improve the English writting. 请大家帮忙看看我论文的语法，挑挑虫。金币全给了，感激。 Over the Past decades，partially coherent beams have been extensively investigated and have found wide applications in many fields，such as free-space optical communications，material thermal processing by laser beam，laser scanning，inertial confinement fusion by laser，nonlinear optics and imaging applications. Recently，the characterization and propagation of partially coherent beams are topics of considerable interest. The partially coherent sources could produce the same far-field intensity distribution as a laser. Moreover, the partially coherent beams are demonstrated to have advantage over the spatially completely coherent beams. So here we further study of partially coherent pulsed beam modulation instability. When two or more optical fields having different wavelengths propagate simultaneously inside a medium, they interact with each other through the medium nonlinearity. The medium nonlinearity can also couple two fields through cross-phase modulation without inducing any energy transfer between them. The physical system please see G. P. Agrawal Nonlinear Fiber Optics, 3rd Edition.Our proposed equation (1), it applied to the two optical fields in Kerr medium, because his cross-phase modulation, so need to use the last one in equation (1) to describe. As we discuss problems of two optical fields of partially coherent light, therefore, must be use the concept of the statistical average. The equation (1) of the further research on the reference [16]. The second page of the revised manuscript, we further described in equation (1). 不用懂专业，只要纠纠语法错误就行。 |
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前面都很不错，但感觉像是从已发表的论文抄过来的 从‘So here’开始下面这段可以说整个一塌糊涂，惨不忍睹。唉都是四六级考试害的，这种考试引导害人太厉害了。找个能人重写或者花钱找翻译公司吧，就算帮你改这一小段也没什么用。下面一塌糊涂 So here we further study of partially coherent pulsed beam modulation instability. When two or more optical fields having different wavelengths propagate simultaneously inside a medium, they interact with each other through the medium nonlinearity. The medium nonlinearity can also couple two fields through cross-phase modulation without inducing any energy transfer between them. The physical system please see G. P. Agrawal Nonlinear Fiber Optics, 3rd Edition.Our proposed equation (1), it applied to the two optical fields in Kerr medium, because his cross-phase modulation, so need to use the last one in equation (1) to describe. As we discuss problems of two optical fields of partially coherent light, therefore, must be use the concept of the statistical average. The equation (1) of the further research on the reference [16]. The second page of the revised manuscript, we further described in equation (1). |
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