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tlltjay

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[求助] 看看老美审稿人如何喷我的。。悬赏纠语法~

寄稿SCI遭受沉重打击。。。下面是回复:

Referee: This paper really needs to be proof read by an English native or by someone fluent in English, because the number of grammatical errors is huge.

我只能回: Sorry for our poor English. We have tried our best to improve the English writting.

请大家帮忙看看我论文的语法,挑挑虫。金币全给了,感激。

Over the Past decades,partially coherent beams have been extensively investigated and have found wide applications in many fields,such as free-space optical communications,material thermal processing by laser beam,laser scanning,inertial confinement fusion by laser,nonlinear optics and imaging applications. Recently,the characterization and propagation of partially coherent beams are topics of considerable interest. The partially coherent sources could produce the same far-field intensity distribution as a laser. Moreover, the partially coherent beams are demonstrated to have advantage over the spatially completely coherent beams. So here we further study of partially coherent pulsed beam  modulation instability.
When two or more optical fields having different wavelengths propagate simultaneously inside a medium, they interact with each other through the medium nonlinearity. The medium nonlinearity can also couple two fields through cross-phase modulation without inducing any energy transfer between them. The physical system please see G. P. Agrawal Nonlinear Fiber Optics, 3rd Edition.Our proposed equation (1), it applied to the two optical fields in Kerr medium, because his cross-phase modulation, so need to use the last one in equation (1) to describe.
As we discuss problems of two optical fields of partially coherent light, therefore, must be use the concept of the statistical average. The equation (1) of the further research on the reference [16]. The second page of the revised manuscript, we further described in equation (1).
不用懂专业,只要纠纠语法错误就行。
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and have found wide applications in many fields,前面一句用的是被动语态,后面这句主语应该换掉了,或改成have been applied in  many fields?
so here 是因此么?
我不懂专业,没耐心看下去,呵呵
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xzhao1

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开始是In the last decades  吧,还有在很多领域广泛应用应该是have been widely used in many fields. 其实我英语也很差,不过还是看出了挺多问题的,建议找个英语专业的同学帮忙看一下组句就行啊。
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cjn10

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你咋确定就是老美?
不在迷雾中趴下,就走迷雾中前行
3楼2012-07-13 08:43:46
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voith

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建议还是花钱找专业的修稿人或者机构改改吧,想投顶级SCI不下血本是不行的
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