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We have received the reports from our advisors on your manuscript, "*****", which you submitted to ***.  Based on the advice received, your manuscript could be reconsidered for publication should you be prepared to incorporate major revisions. When preparing your revised manuscript, you are asked to carefully consider the reviewer comments which are attached, and submit a list of responses to the comments. Your list of responses should be uploaded as a file in addition to your revised manuscript.
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This paper would be of interest to the readers of ***. However, more efforts may as well be necessary. Limitations and assumptions should be clearly explained in your paper. Also, the English should be checked by a native speaker.  
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Reviewer #1: The proposed category of the paper is not suitable. I recommend category to be changed to Technical note.  I think the technical content is interesting and will be useful to readers. However, many sentences are extremely difficult to comprehend or grammatically wrong. Moreover, some of the methods and results lack sufficient description.  
I am worried that it will take two or more reviews and revisions to make this manuscript become a paper. I recommend that the authors make the manuscript simple and short while clearly describe the limitations and assumptions that are used to obtain the results.   

Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript is a good improvement from the original submission. There are still a few typos and suggested improvements before it is ready for publication.
I have annotated my suggestions in the returned manuscript.

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