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The authors have reduced the text and produced a more readable manuscript. There still are many linguistically objectionable features in the paper but I imagine that these will be edited out during the copy editing phase. This reviewer feels that the design features for the curtain wall for this super tall building would be important for the field.

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The English of the manuscript is full of grammatical errors and needs to be modified carefully before a probable publication is considered by the editors. A number of linguistic errors are highlighted in the attached file as guiding examples. Technical aspects of the performed study may be evaluated by other reviewers having more related research experiences.
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