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The English of the manuscript is full of grammatical errors and needs to be modified carefully before a probable publication is considered by the editors. A number of linguistic errors are highlighted in the attached file as guiding examples. Technical aspects of the performed study may be evaluated by other reviewers having more related research experiences.
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