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bingjianla2008

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[求助] 哪位高人能帮我看看这个审稿意见是什么意思?

Dear Dr Hong:

Your manuscript entitled "文章名" which you submitted to 杂志名, has been reviewed. The reviewer comments are included at the bottom of this letter.

The review is in general favorable and suggest that, subject to minor revisions, your paper could be suitable for publication. Please consider these suggestions, and we look forwards to receiving your revision.

Please attend to all of the suggestions made by the reviewer. They are all very reasonable and I think should make your paper much much better.

When you revise your manuscript please highlight the changes you make in the manuscript by using the track changes mode in MS Word or by using bold or colored text.

Please enter your responses to the comments made by the reviewer(s) in the space provided. You can use this space to document any changes you made to the original manuscript. Please be as specific as possible in your response to the reviewer(s).

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Once again, thank you for submitting your manuscript to Mitochondrial DNA and I look forward to receiving your revision.

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Dr Rob DeSalle
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Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:

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This MS deals with interesting but bipartite subjects concerning to (1) comparative mitochondrial genomics of l物种名 and (2) lphylogeography in a Chinese major lake. This MS should thus be mede up to two separate MSs; one includes mitochondrial genomics, and the other about phylogeography. See a letter to the authors for details.

Regarding the first matter, the authors made an interesting finding of the length variation of “基因名”. It is empirically known that vertebrate “基因名” shows highly conserved features with few indels. Addition of the extra amino-acid tail may be an uncommon structural change specific to the “物种”. The authors confirmed this structural change by cDNA analysis. I am sorry, however, to say that I do not know an appropriate reference describing the length conservation of vertebrate “基因名”. The authors should find it or make an alignment by themselves from a wide range of representative vertebrates from human to sharks or lampreys.
The authors' phylogenetic analysis based on the complete mtDNA sequences gave good resolution. The tree should be just or close to the true tree, and the authors can provide strong discussions. In this regard, I think “一个物种”and “另外一个物种”also have the tailed “基因”. If so, the authors can discuss on this particular sequence structure of ”基因“ as a phylogenetic signal.
  I think the reorganized MS on the first matter will be a good and interesting report.
    Regarding the second matter, the authors may give some phylogeographical discussions on “物种名”from China including the research lake. To do this, however, the authors should first make clear the localities of loach sequences from other studies.
If adequately reorganized as a phylogeographic report, the second MS would also be worth publishing in an international journal like '杂志名'.

The content of this MS, however, is quite immature as the present delivery. The English writing style needs improvements aided by English proofreaders. The authors' data handling has several errors. See a list below for detail.
请哪位高手帮我看看,这个编辑是什么意思呢?是不是要我把文章拆成2篇发表,还是说别的意思呢?现在拿不定主意。

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: Originally posted by epirsgis at 2012-01-03 13:46:27:
拆成两篇可a发表。评价很高啊。
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不能分成2篇呀,前面的那个还好说,后面的那个的数据有很多是从NCBI中下载下来的哦,根本不能考究其取样点的
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seapass(金币+5): 鼓励新虫发帖!给个红包!欢迎常来论文投稿版! 2012-01-03 15:14:57
不是要把你的文章拆成2篇发表,他的主要意思是说你的文章的内容和着重点不统一,联系的不够紧密,也就是说有两个重点,但两个重点之间的逻辑性不强甚至没有多大的关联!那么这样看来你的文章实际上就是由两篇小文章组合而成!同时,相比而言,他认为该文章的第一部分更具研究价值。
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avast2009(金币+2): 攻关帖特别奖励 2012-01-05 12:18:20
拆成两篇可a发表。评价很高啊。

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avast2009(金币+2): 攻关帖特别奖励 2012-01-05 12:18:26
如只有这一个审稿人,我觉得可以分成两篇,如还有别的审稿人,可能要慎重了
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