3、The working principles of the researching methods are not clearly explained, the novelty is not clearly presented.
4、A clearer introduction is needed for the experiments conditions and process, separately from the experimental results.
应该怎么按照这两点来修改呢?
虫友们有没有遇到过这样的问题呢?
是把文章中所用的方法的背景原理,以及实验条件及过程介绍清楚吗?
我觉得我写的很清楚了啊,可为什么编辑还要提这两点?
这个MS比较好改吧,working principles of the researching methods你在introduction里说请出了,也就是为什么这么做有novelty
experiments conditions and proces更应该在materials and methods中写清楚了