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书剑如风

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[求助] acta E 审稿意见回复(语法方面的),万急!~~~~~ 请高手看下!

1. In the first sentence of the abstract, the “oxazole goup” has been replaced by  “oxazole goups”, and the second sentence has been replaced by “The six-coordinate complex displays a distorted octahedral geometry”.
这句话中的 has been replaced by 用的是否合适?
2. According to your well-meaning suggestions, the quondam last sentence of the abstract and the Fig. 2. have been deleted.
这句话中的 well-meaning 和 quondam 用的是否恰当?
3.The reference of “Sheldrick, G. M. (2001). SHELXTL. Version 5.0. Bruker AXS Inc., Madison, Wisconsin, USA.” has been replaced by “Sheldrick, G. M. (2008). Acta Cryst. A64, 112—122.”
这条中的 The reference of  用的是否恰当!
4. In the computing details block, the below details
“_computing_structure_solution     'SHELXS-97 (Sheldrick, 1990)'
_computing_publication_material    SHELXTL ”
have been replaced by
“_computing_structure_solution     'SHELXS97 (Sheldrick, 2008)'
_computing_publication_material    'SHELXL97 ' ”
这句对不对呢?尤其第一句话In the computing details block, the below details
5. In the comment, the sentences “...........” have been replaced by “...........”

6.  According to your instructive suggestions, I have checked the structure of this complex with MPLA in SHELXL97, and the sentences “................” have been replaced by “................”.

7.  In the comment, I have shortened the text by using just one sentence which refers to Table 1. The quondam sentences “................... ” have been replaced by “...................... ”
这句话中I have shortened the text by using just one sentence which refers to Table 1. 语法有没有错误?
8.  According to your suggestions, the Table 1 only shows the six Ir---C/N/O bond distances. And the title of the Table 1 have been replaced by “Selected bond lengths (\%A) for the title compound”.
9.  The Fig. 2. and the sentences “............” have been deleted.

改了一天,不知道改的怎么样
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书剑如风(金币+10): 2011-08-21 18:27:24
drg1984(金币+1): 感谢回帖交流! 2011-08-27 03:49:55
我觉得你写的可以的!
如果你觉得有问题的话,你可以将has been replaced by改为has been revised.
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书剑如风(金币+20): 编辑给我说了很多,指出了需要修改的地方,有些已经给我说具体怎么改,有些只是提示,这个是我给编辑的回信,我主要想知道我说的这些话有没有语法错误, 2011-08-19 19:41:43
drg1984(金币+1): 感谢回帖交流! 2011-08-20 00:49:01
这是编辑给你写的信,说明了对你稿件的修改情况。
你在这里问的这些问题,都是你自己理解错了。如
1 这句话中的 has been replaced by 用的是否合适?
2 这句话中的 well-meaning 和 quondam 用的是否恰当?
3 这条中的 The reference of  用的是否恰当!
4 这句对不对呢?尤其第一句话In the computing details block, the below details
这都是编辑对稿件修改的说明!难当你认为还不对吗!你改了一天,都改什么东西了啊。
第一句是这个意思:
abstract第一句中的oxazole goup 改成了oxazole goups, 第二句改成了The six-coordinate complex displays a distorted octahedral geometry.
只要你同意即可。
其他情况类似!


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3楼: Originally posted by fmopily at 2011-08-19 18:54:25:
这是编辑给你写的信,说明了对你稿件的修改情况。
你在这里问的这些问题,都是你自己理解错了。如
1 这句话中的 has been replaced by 用的是否合适?
2 这句话中的 well-meaning 和 quondam 用的是否恰当?
...

这个是我给编辑的回信
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