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书剑如风

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[求助] 晶体方面的论文,审稿意见回复(语法方面的),请高手看下!万急!~~~~~

1. In the first sentence of the abstract, the “oxazole goup” has been replaced by  “oxazole goups”, and the second sentence has been replaced by “The six-coordinate complex displays a distorted octahedral geometry”.
这句话中的 has been replaced by 用的是否合适?
2. According to your well-meaning suggestions, the quondam last sentence of the abstract and the Fig. 2. have been deleted.
这句话中的 well-meaning 和 quondam 用的是否恰当?
3.The reference of “Sheldrick, G. M. (2001). SHELXTL. Version 5.0. Bruker AXS Inc., Madison, Wisconsin, USA.” has been replaced by “Sheldrick, G. M. (2008). Acta Cryst. A64, 112—122.”
这条中的 The reference of  用的是否恰当!
4. In the computing details block, the below details
“_computing_structure_solution     'SHELXS-97 (Sheldrick, 1990)'
_computing_publication_material    SHELXTL ”
have been replaced by
“_computing_structure_solution     'SHELXS97 (Sheldrick, 2008)'
_computing_publication_material    'SHELXL97 ' ”
这句对不对呢?尤其第一句话In the computing details block, the below details
5. In the comment, the sentences “...........” have been replaced by “...........”

6.  According to your instructive suggestions, I have checked the structure of this complex with MPLA in SHELXL97, and the sentences “................” have been replaced by “................”.

7.  In the comment, I have shortened the text by using just one sentence which refers to Table 1. The quondam sentences “................... ” have been replaced by “...................... ”
这句话中I have shortened the text by using just one sentence which refers to Table 1. 语法有没有错误?
8.  According to your suggestions, the Table 1 only shows the six Ir---C/N/O bond distances. And the title of the Table 1 have been replaced by “Selected bond lengths (\%A) for the title compound”.
9.  The Fig. 2. and the sentences “............” have been deleted.

改了一天,不知道改的怎么样
请高手帮忙看下!
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书剑如风

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昨天晚上修改意见发过去
已经接受了
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sitonyl

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书剑如风(金币+20): 采纳1.3.4.7条,一条5金币,谢谢 2011-08-19 09:48:02
1 replaced by->replaced with, changed with
3 reference of -> reference to
4 below details -> following details, or details shown below
7 The text is simplified to one sentence...
9 have been deleted -> were (are) deleted.
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elemon520

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2楼: Originally posted by sitonyl at 2011-08-19 07:58:43:
1 replaced by->replaced with, changed with
3 reference of -> reference to
4 below details -> following details, or details shown below
7 The text is simplified to one sentence...
9 hav ...

个人认为第2点可以改改,再具体一些。其余几个都还可以。看着好像是Acta C 或E 的稿子。内容稍有些乱,最好每个部分的修改内容并在一起写。
具体到第2点,建议删去quondam 以及well-meaning等词。可以考虑:
2. Abstract: The sentence "........" has been deleted.

3. Comment: ......
4. Reference: ......
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