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To achieve a highly sensitive electrochemical immunosensor, various analytical signal amplification strategies have been developed. Firstly, various nanomaterials, including nanowires, nanoparticles, and nanotubes, have been synthesized. Due to their unique mechanical, electrical, and optical properties, these nanomaterials have found important applications in drug discovery and delivery, catalysis, information storage, environmental analysis, biodetections, and many other fields . As one of the most popular biomolecular immobilizing carriers, DNA, protein and enzymes, which include glucose oxidase (GOD), horseradish peroxidase (HRP), and alkaline phosphatase (ALP) have been immobilized on carbon nanotubes (CNTs) , bionanospheres, nanosilica particles  and gold nanoparticles (AuNPs)  for enhancing the enzymatically catalytical signal.
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蓝三角(金币+10): 非常感谢,谢谢哈!!!!! 2011-07-12 00:03:01
As one of the most popular biomolecular immobilizing carriers, DNA, protein and enzymes, which include glucose oxidase (GOD), horseradish peroxidase (HRP), and alkaline phosphatase (ALP) have been immobilized on carbon nanotubes (CNTs) , bionanospheres, nanosilica particles  and gold nanoparticles (AuNPs)  for enhancing the enzymatically catalytical signal.

个人觉得这句话有问题,As one of the most popular biomolecular immobilizing carriers, DNA, protein and enzymes,前面的As one of和后面的  DNA, protein and enzymes应该匹配不上吧?并且你后面举得都是酶的例子,不知道为什么要在这里写 DNA, protein ?还有就是个人建议 for enhancing改成to enhance.
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