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econy

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[求助] 请帮忙修改一下这几段英文,说我一个亲戚的小孩要参加儿童英语比赛的,谢谢

I like singing English songs
Hello, everyone. My English name is Happy. I'm nine years old. I'm very glad to take part in today’s competition. My speech is “I like singing English songs”. I have many hobbies. I like drawing, reading and writing. I like singing English songs, too. I learn English songs from my English teacher. I sing English songs following tape, TV, computer, and so on. Four years ago, I won the award of the first competition of Jiangxi province children English songs.
Now, I’ll sing the song “Donkey Donkey I beg you”.
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sltmac(金币+1): 谢谢交流~~ 2011-05-19 13:29:28
econy(金币+5, 翻译EPI+1): good 2011-05-19 14:11:37
I like singing English songs
Hello, everyone. My English name is Happy. I'm nine years old. It’s my pleasure to stand here for today’s competition. My topic today is “I like singing English songs”. I have many hobbies, such as drawing, reading and writing. But I like singing English songs best. I learn to sing English songs mainly from my English teacher. I also learn to sing English songs following tape, TV and computer. I had won the first competition of children English songs of Jiangxi province four years ago.
Now, I’ll sing the song “Donkey, Donkey,  I beg you”.
2楼2011-05-19 08:09:28
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sltmac(金币+1): 谢谢交流~~ 2011-05-19 13:29:35
econy(金币+2): 2011-05-19 14:12:25
I like singing English songs
Hello, everyone. My English name is Happy. I'm nine years old and gald to take part in today’s competition. My topic is “I like singing English songs”. I have many hobbies such as drawing, reading and writing. I like singing English songs, too. I learn English songs from my English teacher.And  I sing English songs following tape, TV, computer, and so on. Four years ago, I won the award of the first competition of Jiangxi province children English songs.
Now, I’ll sing the song “Donkey Donkey I beg you”.
生平不抽烟,不饮酒,不喝咖啡,一杯龙井相伴,笑读五经诸史;惟愿少鲁莽,少冲动,少说气话,三思后行为戒,淡看百事纷争。
3楼2011-05-19 08:48:42
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sltmac(金币+1): 谢谢交流~~ 2011-05-19 13:29:41
econy(金币+3): 2011-05-19 14:12:32
I like singing English songs
Hello, everyone. My English name is Happy.I'm nine years old. It is  my honor to take part in the  speech . My topic is “I like singing English songs”. I have many hobbies such as drawing, reading and writing especially singing English songs. I learn English songs from my English teacher. And I sing English songs following tape, TV, computer, and so on. Four years ago, I won the award of the first competition of Jiangxi province children English songs. Now, I’ll sing the song “Donkey Donkey I beg you”.
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