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ailsa3484

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[交流] 求帮助,编辑要求跟一篇已发表论文比较指出改进和贡献,不知道在文中如何改

如下:编辑的意见
Further to the Editor's third query on the previous revision of your paper ('You need to refer to your previous work in the current submission and indicate further improvements and contributions to knowledge'), we would be very grateful if you could please further revise your manuscript so that the paper refers to the previously published paper, 'Transfer matrix method for linear multibody system'  (Multibody System Dynamics, Volume 19, Number 3, 179-207, DOI: 10.1007/s11044-007-9092-0). We would also be grateful if you could please include your comments regarding further improvements and the papers contribution to knowledge in the revised paper.

怎么改,真不知道,编辑想让俺干嘛
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ailsa3484(金币+10): 感谢 2011-03-22 09:36:19
很简单的事情~~~~
再引言部分提到你以前的论文。并指出不足,说明你新文章的主要进展~~~~~~~
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引用回帖:
Originally posted by ailsa3484 at 2011-03-22 09:17:22:
如下:编辑的意见
Further to the Editor's third query on the previous revision of your paper ('You need to refer to your previous work in the current submission and indicate further improvements an ...

感谢万分。帮看下  在引言中加这么一段行不

The current submission applies MS-TMM into solve vibration control problem in complex mulitibody system like MLRS in engineering. This work extends application of MS-TMM. In vibration control of MLRS, optimum of control parameter brings up some demand for computational speed of dynamical response. The high computational speed of MS-TMM in computing dynamical response of complex multibody system reduces the time needed to optimum control parameter largely. The current work verifies the advantage of the high computational speed of MS-TMM in design optimum control parameters. Many researchers try to use passive control to improve fire accuracy of MLRS, but at last give up. One of the reasons is huge dynamical computational works of MLRS. Compare to previous work of improve fire accuracy of MLRS done by other researcher, the advantage of high computational speed of MS-TMM make active vibration control method used in complex multibody system come true.
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小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包,谢谢回帖交流
The current submission  应该改为 The present work
The current work         应该改为 The present  paper
Many researchers           Intensive works have been carried out to .....
要突出 The present work focuses on .....
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而且,你写的有点多了,再精简点~~~~
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引用回帖:
Originally posted by ailsa3484 at 2011-03-22 09:34:11:
感谢万分。帮看下  在引言中加这么一段行不

The current submission applies MS-TMM into solve vibration control problem in complex mulitibody system like MLRS in engineering. This work extends app ...

非常感谢!这就回去好好改改,再投。这都修了三回了。确实傻眼
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