应《网络安全法》要求，自2017年10月1日起，未进行实名认证将不得使用互联网跟帖服务。为保障您的帐号能够正常使用，请尽快对帐号进行手机号验证，感谢您的理解与支持！

24小时热门版块排行榜    

小木虫论坛-学术科研互动平台 » 学术交流区 » 论文投稿 » 投稿求助 » 求帮助，编辑要求跟一篇已发表论文比较指出改进和贡献，不知道在文中如何改
51/1返回列表
查看: 878  |  回复: 5
只看楼主 @他人 存档 新回复提醒 (忽略) 收藏    在APP中查看
当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖，点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖

ailsa3484

新虫 (初入文坛)

[交流] 求帮助，编辑要求跟一篇已发表论文比较指出改进和贡献，不知道在文中如何改

如下：编辑的意见
Further to the Editor's third query on the previous revision of your paper ('You need to refer to your previous work in the current submission and indicate further improvements and contributions to knowledge'), we would be very grateful if you could please further revise your manuscript so that the paper refers to the previously published paper, 'Transfer matrix method for linear multibody system'  (Multibody System Dynamics, Volume 19, Number 3, 179-207, DOI: 10.1007/s11044-007-9092-0). We would also be grateful if you could please include your comments regarding further improvements and the papers contribution to knowledge in the revised paper.

怎么改，真不知道，编辑想让俺干嘛
回复此楼

» 猜你喜欢

» 本主题相关价值贴推荐，对您同样有帮助:

» 抢金币啦！回帖就可以得到:

查看全部散金贴
1楼 2011-03-22 09:17:22
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

jwfu

至尊木虫 (文坛精英)
而且，你写的有点多了，再精简点~~~~
赞一下 回复此楼
5楼2011-03-22 11:15:12
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 6 个回答

jwfu

至尊木虫 (文坛精英)
ailsa3484(金币+10): 感谢 2011-03-22 09:36:19
很简单的事情~~~~
再引言部分提到你以前的论文。并指出不足，说明你新文章的主要进展~~~~~~~
赞一下 回复此楼
2楼2011-03-22 09:23:00
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

ailsa3484

新虫 (初入文坛)
引用回帖:
Originally posted by ailsa3484 at 2011-03-22 09:17:22:
如下：编辑的意见
Further to the Editor's third query on the previous revision of your paper ('You need to refer to your previous work in the current submission and indicate further improvements an ...

感谢万分。帮看下  在引言中加这么一段行不

The current submission applies MS-TMM into solve vibration control problem in complex mulitibody system like MLRS in engineering. This work extends application of MS-TMM. In vibration control of MLRS, optimum of control parameter brings up some demand for computational speed of dynamical response. The high computational speed of MS-TMM in computing dynamical response of complex multibody system reduces the time needed to optimum control parameter largely. The current work verifies the advantage of the high computational speed of MS-TMM in design optimum control parameters. Many researchers try to use passive control to improve fire accuracy of MLRS, but at last give up. One of the reasons is huge dynamical computational works of MLRS. Compare to previous work of improve fire accuracy of MLRS done by other researcher, the advantage of high computational speed of MS-TMM make active vibration control method used in complex multibody system come true.
赞一下 回复此楼
3楼2011-03-22 09:34:11
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

jwfu

至尊木虫 (文坛精英)
★
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
The current submission  应该改为 The present work
The current work         应该改为 The present  paper
Many researchers           Intensive works have been carried out to .....
要突出 The present work focuses on .....
赞一下(1人) 回复此楼
4楼2011-03-22 11:14:25
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 6 个回答
普通表情 龙 兔 虎 猫 高级回复 (可上传附件)
信息提示
关闭
请填处理意见
关闭