3.The arguments and ideas of the work are somewhat good, but the data presentation needs more efforts, especially in the organization of the paper. Journal rules are not clear here. For example, the organization should include Material and Methodology, Result and Discussions, etc. to be easily followed. In its present form, reading the paper is a boredom task.
这个意见不好改，难为我了。前面几条都是说语言问题较多，摘要需要重写，第三条就这个了，大修 |
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