[交流] 求助！英文标题翻译！

Originally posted by zerohead at 2011-02-16 14:28:42:
Improvement of COD and TOC reactive dyes in textile wastewater by coagulation chemical material

利用化学絮凝物质改良纺织业印染废水中的COD和TOC活性染料

Originally posted by 8814402 at 2011-02-16 15:49:38:
利用化学絮凝材料降低纺织业印染废水中活性染料 的COD和TOC值

Originally posted by 莫负初心 at 2011-02-17 13:33:00:
还是觉得不对啊，没有改良COD和TOC活性染料的说法啊。COD和TOC是降低的。可是improvement又是提高的意思。

Originally posted by 莫负初心 at 2011-02-17 13:33:52:
improvement不是提高的意思吗？可以翻译为降低吗？

Originally posted by 8814402 at 2011-02-17 14:30:40:
根据意思来译啊，improvement是改善的意思，不一定是增加啊，废水中COD和TOC值降低是研究的目的，所以改善旧译为降低吧

Originally posted by zerohead at 2011-02-17 13:44:52:


因为这句英文本身就是错的。