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Due to poor use of English and questionable organisation, it was difficult to understand and make sense of this manuscript, but with perseverance I appreciate what the authors are trying to do and believe they are essentially correct...... The above assessment suggests that there will eventually be a worthy published paper, but considerable improvements need to be made before that outcome is reached......In addition to the above, the manuscript requires a great deal of detailed correction. The necessary changes are too many to list, but I am happy to provide a pdf of my annotated script to help the authors. They would be well advised to seek the help of a person adept in English before submitting a corrected version.
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