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[½»Á÷] ¡¾Ô­´´¡¿daily compositon_No.2: It pays to be a doctor!

Nowadays, more and more people pursue wealthy and comfort life, So more and more people prefer doing business and discriminate knowledge. Even many ones believe that  knowledge is usefulness in recent years, most students prefer earning money rather than continuing studying, especially graduates.
       However, the remainings insist that continuing studying be a more sensible choice. First of all, it's liable for high education ones to seek for a more suitable job, Because they can easily satisfy the requirements of employers. Furthermore, knowledge also better our self-confidences and characters. The ones with more knowledge usually be more insight to our world.
       As far as I'm concerned, everyone has choice himself. Every coin has two sides. It's deserved that you won't regret your choice forever.
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VERY GOOD!!!
2Â¥2010-12-20 10:36:58
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oh,a very good composition!
I'd like to point out several grammatical errors for you.

comfort life ->comfortable life
discriminate knowledge ->discriminate against knowledge
knowledge is usefulness -> knowledge is useless
the remainings -> the remaining
high education -¡·high-educated
knowledge also better ×¢ÒâÖ÷νһÖÂ
Please pay enough attention to the agreement of the subject and the predicate.
3Â¥2010-12-20 12:38:38
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chuhongyun(½ð±Ò+1):Thank you for your viewpoints, I agree with you badly. Your viewpoints make me known how narrow my thought is! 2010-12-20 20:58:33
i want to say something
it is not appropriate to blame all of the ones who give up attending school.
when an individual becomes an adult,she/he has unshirkable responsibility to make a living for her/his family.she/he want to help the poor family walk out the trouble.yes ,i admit that money is not universal,but when your family members can not afford the life necessity,you still have the mood and belief and the time to insist that one day ,some day around the corner,you will be successful?
maybe ,for humbeings ,the first thing is not knowedge but surviving.
in our socoety ,with the biger and biger gap between poor and wealth,and the poor can not solve their basic living problems,how greatful the man is to still purpuse the knowedge,how much interest for him/her on the books.
for most of us ,they wish simple and easy life.afer all ,scientist is only a fraction part of us.

[ Last edited by wangping7570 on 2010-12-20 at 14:36 ]
4Â¥2010-12-20 14:33:09
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What's the connection between the tiltle"It pays to be a doctor" and what is actually said in the passage?
5Â¥2010-12-20 16:37:28
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chuhongyun

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Originally posted by yinliguo09 at 2010-12-20 12:38:38:
oh,a very good composition!
I'd like to point out several grammatical errors for you.

comfort life ->comfortable life
discriminate knowledge ->discriminate against knowledge
knowledge  ...

Thank you for your praise and correction!
6Â¥2010-12-20 21:01:22
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chuhongyun

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ÒýÓûØÌû:
Originally posted by yinliguo09 at 2010-12-20 12:38:38:
oh,a very good composition!
I'd like to point out several grammatical errors for you.

comfort life ->comfortable life
discriminate knowledge ->discriminate against knowledge
knowledge  ...

I am sorry there is only one bb, but I will send many bbs to you next time. Thanks to your support by my heart, I will insist my daily composition.
7Â¥2010-12-20 21:37:30
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