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[交流] 【原创】daily compositon_No.2: It pays to be a doctor!

Nowadays, more and more people pursue wealthy and comfort life, So more and more people prefer doing business and discriminate knowledge. Even many ones believe that  knowledge is usefulness in recent years, most students prefer earning money rather than continuing studying, especially graduates.
       However, the remainings insist that continuing studying be a more sensible choice. First of all, it's liable for high education ones to seek for a more suitable job, Because they can easily satisfy the requirements of employers. Furthermore, knowledge also better our self-confidences and characters. The ones with more knowledge usually be more insight to our world.
       As far as I'm concerned, everyone has choice himself. Every coin has two sides. It's deserved that you won't regret your choice forever.
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oh,a very good composition!
I'd like to point out several grammatical errors for you.

comfort life ->comfortable life
discriminate knowledge ->discriminate against knowledge
knowledge is usefulness -> knowledge is useless
the remainings -> the remaining
high education -》high-educated
knowledge also better 注意主谓一致
Please pay enough attention to the agreement of the subject and the predicate.
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