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The microstructure of WC-10Co cemented carbides with different addition amount of plate-like WC seeds is shown in Fig.2. The addition of plate-like seeds helps the development of plate-like WC grains. With the increase of seed addition, more plate-like WC grains with more regular shape and bigger aspect ratio are formed, and the average size of WC grains becomes larger. When 10 mass% seeds are added, the amount of plate-like WC grains and the average grain size reach the maximum values, but there are some pores.
想表达的中文意思是
图2为加入不同晶种量后粗粉WC-10wt%Co硬质合金的显微组织照片。通过显微组织的对比我们可以看出,随着板状WC晶种添加量的增加,合金中呈现出板状形貌的WC晶粒的数目不断增多,其板状形貌也越发明显,且长径比也不断增大;同时随着晶种加入量的增加,晶粒的平均尺寸不断增大。当晶种加入量为10%时,合金中板状WC晶粒最多,晶粒平均尺寸最大,但组织中出现了少许孔隙。

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liukunde(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1):很好 2010-12-14 22:32:27
The microstructures of WC-10Co cemented carbides with different amount of plate-like WC seeds are shown in Fig.2. (The addition of plate-like seeds helps the development of plate-like WC grains.) As shown in Fig.2, with the increase of seeds, more plate-like WC grains with more regular shapes and bigger aspect ratio are formed, and the average size of WC grains becomes larger. When the addition of seeds reaches 10 mass%, plate-like WC grains and the average grain size  have maximum values, but there are some pores.
括号中那句没有中文意思对应阿
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图2为加入不同晶种量后粗粉WC-10wt%Co硬质合金的显微组织照片。

The microstructures of WC-10Co cemented carbides with different additions of plate-like WC seeds are shown in Fig.2.
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liukunde(金币+1):很好 2010-12-14 22:32:47
其实楼主的句子基本没有太大问题,只是有些词感觉比较赘述,可以承前省略,多用被动语态。
The microstructure of WC-10Co cemented carbides with different addition amount of plate-like WC seeds is shown in Fig.2. As shown in Fig 2,the growth of plate-like WC grains was promoted by the addition of the seeds. With the increase of seed addition, more plate-like WC grains with more regular shape and bigger aspect ratio are formed, and the average size of WC grains becomes larger. When 10 mass% seeds are added, the amount and average size of the grains  reach the maximum values and some pores were generated in framework.
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