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À¼ºûµû(½ð±Ò+2):nice correction~~ 2010-10-28 16:00:15
À¼ºûµû(½ð±Ò+2):nice correction~~ 2010-10-28 16:00:15
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My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important! I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write! So I want to write some here! In my passage,there must be many errors! Please help me finding them, and tell me how to use them! Today I just write these, I think I have already made many errors! |
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6Â¥2010-10-28 15:54:55
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nash603
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9Â¥2010-10-28 16:13:04
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Èý¸üÓê~(½ð±Ò+1):learning English is a long process. best wishes~~ 2010-10-28 22:03:13
Èý¸üÓê~(½ð±Ò+1):learning English is a long process. best wishes~~ 2010-10-28 22:03:13
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My English is poor too! I do not understand the Englisn grammar, i feel it so difficult. I want to know hou did you lern englian? |

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