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My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
  Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!

  PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
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you are very quickly! just five seconds!
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À¼ºûµû(½ð±Ò+2):nice correction~~ 2010-10-28 16:00:15
My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some here! In my passage,there must be many errors!  
  Please help me finding them, and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write these, I think I have already made many errors!
4Â¥2010-10-28 15:40:43
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5Â¥2010-10-28 15:42:00
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Originally posted by Èý¸üÓê~ at 2010-10-28 15:40:43:
My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some [color=R ...

Is the error very easy? I think so after I see your reply!
But I can't do it good!
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try to write more next time, and before writing, don't think about error too much. just write as you want.Here many people can help you.
7Â¥2010-10-28 16:01:08
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Originally posted by nash603 at 2010-10-28 15:54:55:



Is the error very easy? I think so after I see your reply!
But I can't do it good!

just be more careful and you will do it better~~
maybe you can read it before you send it ~
i want to be a happy butterfly~~
8Â¥2010-10-28 16:01:54
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Originally posted by xuanxuankaoyan at 2010-10-28 16:01:08:
try to write more next time, and before writing, don't think about error too much. just write as you want.Here many people can help you.

thank you
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Èý¸üÓê~(½ð±Ò+1):learning English is a long process. best wishes~~ 2010-10-28 22:03:13
My English is poor too!
I do not understand the Englisn grammar, i feel it so difficult.
I want to know hou did you lern englian?
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