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try to write more next time, and before writing, don't think about error too much. just write as you want.Here many people can help you.
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My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some here! In my passage,there must be many errors!  
  Please help me finding them, and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write these, I think I have already made many errors!
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