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[交流] 【Original】【error correction】Please help my English!

My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
  Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!

  PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
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