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nash603

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[交流] 【Original】【error correction】Please help my English!

My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
  Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!

  PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
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Originally posted by nash603 at 2010-10-28 15:54:55:



Is the error very easy? I think so after I see your reply!
But I can't do it good!

just be more careful and you will do it better~~
maybe you can read it before you send it ~
i want to be a happy butterfly~~
8楼2010-10-28 16:01:54
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nothing to say
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2楼2010-10-28 15:27:02
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nash603

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you are very quickly! just five seconds!
因为有梦想,我们披星戴月,只争朝夕,因为有承诺,我们义无反顾,勇往直前!
3楼2010-10-28 15:29:37
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兰蝴蝶(金币+2):nice correction~~ 2010-10-28 16:00:15
My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some here! In my passage,there must be many errors!  
  Please help me finding them, and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write these, I think I have already made many errors!
4楼2010-10-28 15:40:43
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