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三更雨~(金币+1):thank you for your kind advice~~good night 2010-10-28 22:02:19
Your English is not so poor as you said,just less proficient! Practice English everyday.  Industry is the parent of success.
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11楼2010-10-28 18:27:33
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Originally posted by nash603 at 2010-10-28 15:54:55:



Is the error very easy? I think so after I see your reply!
But I can't do it good!

Well, I think 'See 'maybe be changed into 'saw', and 'Good 'should be corrected into 'well'. Fighting!
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12楼2010-10-28 21:54:05
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Originally posted by nash603 at 2010-10-28 15:54:55:



Is the error very easy? I think so after I see your reply!
But I can't do it good!

you should pay more attention to the use of some verbs. Add oil~~
13楼2010-10-28 22:01:45
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三更雨~(金币+5):good job~~ 2010-10-30 21:11:47

1) My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
2) I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
>> I think English skills includes listening, speaking, reading and writing .
3) So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
>> So I want to write something here . In my passage, there must be many errors !
4) Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
>> Please help me find them, and tell me how to correct !
5) Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!
>> Today I just stop here , I think there are many errors already !
6) PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
>> P.S. Who grabs the sofa must tell me where the errors are !



Please compare them carefully. I think you know where the errors are and why they are wrong. If you still don't understand, welcome to ask again.O(∩_∩)O~
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14楼2010-10-28 22:12:41
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by xuanxuankaoyan at 2010-10-28 16:01:08:
try to write more next time, and before writing, don't think about error too much. just write as you want.Here many people can help you.

Good idea!
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15楼2010-10-28 22:15:56
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xia_chong

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Originally posted by 薄荷糖1803 at 2010-10-28 18:27:19:
My English is poor too!
I do not understand the Englisn grammar, i feel it so difficult.
I want to know hou did you lern englian?


Please see here!
O(∩_∩)O~
http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2504452&fpage=1
and
http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2143586


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16楼2010-10-28 22:17:41
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read it before  you send it  ~
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17楼2010-10-30 10:20:25
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Originally posted by 三更雨~ at 2010-10-28 15:40:43:
My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some [color=R ...

please tell me the usage of help perticularly.thank you
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18楼2010-10-30 10:40:58
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Originally posted by 三更雨~ at 2010-10-28 15:40:43:
My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English learning is to listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want to write some [color=R ...


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Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-06-14 21:08:07:
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My English was not good since the very begining. I found it very hard for me to remember and use so many different English rules. I always got low scores in English tests.

T ...  

can you help me to find some mistakes.thank you

a month ago ,i met a foreigner who had gotten one of the Guinness World Rcords when i waited for bus with my boyfriend. i tolk with he activitly.at that moment ,i felt it was a good feeling that talking with someone in englishi,especially we could understood each other .i felt exciting!
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19楼2010-10-30 11:09:05
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Originally posted by pallas茵 at 2010-10-30 11:09:05:


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  Quote:
Originally posted by xia_chong at 2010-06-14 21:08:07:
[box=White]
My English was not good since the very begining. I found it v ...

a month ago ,i met a foreigner who had gotten one of the Guinness World Rcords when i waited for bus with my boyfriend. i tolk with him actively .at that moment ,i felt it was good to talk with someone in englishi,especially when we could understood with each other .i felt exciting!
hehe~maybe that would be a little better. I think your English is good. welcome you and best wishes~~
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