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[交流] 【Original】【error correction】Please help my English!

My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
  I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
  So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
  Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
  Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!

  PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
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三更雨~(金币+5):good job~~ 2010-10-30 21:11:47

1) My English isn't very good! But I know it's very important!
2) I think English is listen,speak,read and write!
>> I think English skills includes listening, speaking, reading and writing .
3) So I want write some in here! In my passage,there are must mang error!
>> So I want to write something here . In my passage, there must be many errors !
4) Please help me find them,and tell me how to use them!
>> Please help me find them, and tell me how to correct !
5) Today I just write this, I think already have mang error!
>> Today I just stop here , I think there are many errors already !
6) PS:Who grab the sofa must tell me where is the error!
>> P.S. Who grabs the sofa must tell me where the errors are !



Please compare them carefully. I think you know where the errors are and why they are wrong. If you still don't understand, welcome to ask again.O(∩_∩)O~
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14楼2010-10-28 22:12:41
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Originally posted by xuanxuankaoyan at 2010-10-28 16:01:08:
try to write more next time, and before writing, don't think about error too much. just write as you want.Here many people can help you.

Good idea!
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15楼2010-10-28 22:15:56
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Originally posted by 薄荷糖1803 at 2010-10-28 18:27:19:
My English is poor too!
I do not understand the Englisn grammar, i feel it so difficult.
I want to know hou did you lern englian?


Please see here!
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http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2504452&fpage=1
and
http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=2143586


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