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Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.

You are expected to return your Revision by 20 Dec 2010.

Allan Matthews
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Reviewers' comments:


Reviewer #1: 1. Is the subject matter suitable for publication in SURFACE AND COATINGS TECHNOLOGY?
    Yes, once the corrections/clarifications are made.

2. What technological problems are addressed in the paper?
Oxidation control in steel  .     

3. Is the paper acceptable in its present form?
  with minor revision?       ???????????????
4. Is it a new and original contribution?
Yes     

5. Does it contain material that might well be omitted?  If so, what?
No     

6. Is it clearly presented and well organized?
See comments above.     

7. Does it give adequate references related to work?
   
Yes
8. Is the English satisfactory?  
No, corrections need to be made.
9. Are the illustrations and tables all necessary and adequate?
   
Yes
10. Is the summary adequate and informative?
Yes     

11. Are the conclusions sound and justified?
   

12. Please list further comments or specific suggestions below:

I found that the work was interesting and potentially useful to ********.
In general, the manuscript suffers from a number of typographical/grammatical errors which need to be corrected.  I have indicated these in red on the scanned manuscript.  
Specifically, at the top of page 7, mention is made of a particle size distribution in the slurry, but no specific numbers are given.  The manuscript would benefit by their inclusion.  
Equation 1 on page 6 needs a reference.
Finally, more details need to be provided on page 9 when talking about the formation of *****
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