| 查看: 884 | 回复: 6 | |||
| 本帖产生 1 个 翻译EPI ，点击这里进行查看 | |||
8569636.hi木虫 (正式写手)
|
[交流]
请问这句话有语病吗？
|
||
|
请问这句话有语病吗？ Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show size-dependent point depression versus reciprocal particle diameter for Al and Bi nanoparticles in comparison to available experimental results, respectively. |
回复此楼» 猜你喜欢
存款400万可以在学校里躺平吗
已经有14人回复
-
Materials Today Chemistry审稿周期
已经有6人回复
-
拟解决的关键科学问题还要不要写
已经有6人回复
-
基金委咋了？2026年的指南还没有出来？
已经有10人回复
-
基金申报
已经有6人回复
-
推荐一本书
已经有13人回复
-
国自然申请面上模板最新2026版出了吗？
已经有17人回复
-
纳米粒子粒径的测量
已经有8人回复
-
疑惑？
已经有5人回复
-
计算机、0854电子信息（085401-058412）调剂
已经有5人回复
cfk580713
至尊木虫 (著名写手)
- 翻译EPI: 277
- 应助: 30 (小学生)
- 贵宾: 0.038
- 金币: 13604.3
- 散金: 123
- 红花: 6
- 帖子: 1258
- 在线: 826.1小时
- 虫号: 253096
- 注册: 2006-05-20
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 有机高分子功能材料
★
发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-07-10 13:38:05
8569636.hi(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1):谢谢！ 2010-07-11 08:02:22
发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-07-10 13:38:05
8569636.hi(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1):谢谢！ 2010-07-11 08:02:22
|
不知道具体的语境哈 这样写不知道是否改变了原意 Based on the three considerations mentioned above, experimental results shown in Figures 6 and 7 reveal size-dependent point depression versus reciprocal particle diameter for Al and Bi nanoparticles, respectively. |
2楼2010-07-10 11:21:44
zerohead
禁虫 (职业作家)
- 翻译EPI: 466
- 应助: 1 (幼儿园)
- 贵宾: 0.301
- 金币: 8727.8
- 散金: 850
- 红花: 15
- 沙发: 10
- 帖子: 3768
- 在线: 471.7小时
- 虫号: 1041741
- 注册: 2010-06-14
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 逻辑学
★
发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-07-10 13:38:12
8569636.hi(金币+2):谢谢！ 2010-07-11 08:02:54
发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-07-10 13:38:12
8569636.hi(金币+2):谢谢！ 2010-07-11 08:02:54
| well, you may have a few points to say, but that's not good to make such a long sentence, especially the arrangement is not appropriate. besides, your meaning is not clear, "based on some considersation" then you need to "compare with some experimental results", which one is the major consideration? so I would suggest you to make it into some simple sentences first, then combine them if you feel necessarily. |
3楼2010-07-10 12:40:17
zerohead
禁虫 (职业作家)
- 翻译EPI: 466
- 应助: 1 (幼儿园)
- 贵宾: 0.301
- 金币: 8727.8
- 散金: 850
- 红花: 15
- 沙发: 10
- 帖子: 3768
- 在线: 471.7小时
- 虫号: 1041741
- 注册: 2010-06-14
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 逻辑学
4楼2010-07-11 01:46:44
8569636.hi
木虫 (正式写手)
- 翻译EPI: 1
- 应助: 3 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 3419.5
- 散金: 391
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 647
- 在线: 191.9小时
- 虫号: 956566
- 注册: 2010-02-19
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 金属非晶态、准晶和纳米晶
|
语境是这样的： To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10): (a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do; (b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone; (c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do. Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show..... 请问我这样表述可以吗？ |
5楼2010-07-11 08:05:27
8569636.hi
木虫 (正式写手)
- 翻译EPI: 1
- 应助: 3 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 3419.5
- 散金: 391
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 647
- 在线: 191.9小时
- 虫号: 956566
- 注册: 2010-02-19
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 金属非晶态、准晶和纳米晶
|
我的原意是这样的： To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10): (a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do; (b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone; (c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do. Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show...... 请问上面的表述有问题吗？象大多数人一样，“as most researchers do”，可以这样翻译吗？ |
6楼2010-07-11 08:12:29
noleg
金虫 (小有名气)
- 翻译EPI: 52
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 贵宾: 0.005
- 金币: 1423.7
- 帖子: 161
- 在线: 43.9小时
- 虫号: 932452
- 注册: 2009-12-23
- 性别: GG
7楼2010-07-11 09:59:41