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[交流] 请问这句话有语病吗?

请问这句话有语病吗?
Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show size-dependent point depression versus reciprocal particle diameter for Al and Bi nanoparticles in comparison to available experimental results, respectively.
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Originally posted by cfk580713 at 2010-07-10 11:21:44:
不知道具体的语境哈 这样写不知道是否改变了原意
Based on the three considerations mentioned above, experimental results shown in Figures 6 and 7 reveal size-dependent point depression versus recipro ...

语境是这样的:
To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10):
(a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do;
(b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone;
(c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do.
    Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show.....
请问我这样表述可以吗?
5楼2010-07-11 08:05:27
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Originally posted by zerohead at 2010-07-11 01:46:44:
why don't you post short sentences?

我的原意是这样的:
To investigate effect of the bulk experimental values on the melting point depression, we take into account three factors that affect the melting point of nanostructured materials according to Eqs. (2) - (10):
(a) neglecting the temperature dependence of surface free energy alone, i.e. assuming constant surface free energy as most researchers do;
(b) neglecting the temperature dependence of molar volume alone;
(c) assuming equal molar volume for solid and liquid as Kim et al. do.
    Based on above three considerations, Figures 6 and 7 show......
请问上面的表述有问题吗?象大多数人一样,“as most researchers do”,可以这样翻译吗?
6楼2010-07-11 08:12:29
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