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wuss2005

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ljl1205(金币+5,VIP+0): 9-12 14:55
Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:
> Reviewer: 1
> Recommendation: Accept after minor revisions.
> Comments:
> The authors present here biomineralization of BaCO3 complex nanostructures. It is indeed a research focus of nanotechnology. They provide enough data to study the growth mechanism. Especially, they report the superhydrophobicity of BaCO3. I believe this nanomaterial will find application in the future. Therefore, the work can be accepted for publication after following two questions are clarified.
> (1) The authors claimed that the as-prepared BaCO3 crystals were well oriented and grew mainly along the (111) face based on the corresponding XRD pattern. This conclusion should be confirmed again with HRTEM.
> (2) In Page 6, the authors mentioned the existence of hydrogen bonds in the complex BaCO3 nanostructures. What are the components or functional groups forming the hydrogen bonds?
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> Reviewer: 2
> Recommendation: Accept after minor revisions.
> Comments:
> This paper is a well-written paper containing interesting results for the biomineralization and superhydrophobicity of BaCO3 complex nanostructures.  The synthesis, characterization, physicochemical measurement and formation mechanism of BaCO3 complex nanostructures are appropriately described.  This manuscript is suitable for publication in Inorganic Chemistry  However, a few minor revisions are listed below.
> 1) page 3, line 14 and so on:  BaCO3 ?
> 2) page 3, lines 15-16:  The reference [1] in text should describe in "references" term.
> 3) page 6, line s 18-22:  [KJ] ?
> 4) caption of Figure 2: HRTEMTEM ?
> Please correct for wrong compound name, unit, abbreviation and so on.
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wuss2005

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ljl1205(金币+5,VIP+0): 9-12 14:54
ljl1205(金币+5,VIP+0): 9-13 11:50
Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:
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> Reviewer: 1
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> Recommendation: This paper is publishable subject to minor revisions noted.  Further review is not needed.
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> Comments:
> Wu and co-workers report amino-acid-assisted hydrothermal synthesis and photocatalysis of SnO2 nanocrystals. This is an interesting research work. The as-synthesized SnO2 nanocrystals are monodisperse nanocrystrtals with particle size below 10 nm, as well as excellent photocatalytic activity of RhB dye with the degradation of RhB close 100% within 150 min.  However, the presented TEM images (Figure 3) is too small to show the size and dispersity of the particles. After providing more clear images, the manuscript can be accepted for publication.
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> Reviewer: 2
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> Recommendation: This paper is probably publishable, but should be reviewed again in revised form before it is accepted.
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> Comments:
>    This communication described the hydrothermal synthesis of SnO2 nanoparticles with small diameter and their photocatalytic degradation properties. This manuscript can be considered for publication on JPCC after the following comments modified.
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> 1. In the manuscript, only the sample s-3 was applied in the photocatalytic degradation study. The authors should add more experiments on the other samples prepared in the report. Then the influence of the particle size of the the samples should be presented.
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> 2. And based on the photocatalytic degradation experiments for all the sample, selecting the best one sample for further characterization, such as UV-Vis absorption study and HRTEM study.
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> 3. Some writting errors should be corrected:
>     Page 4, Line 44, D should be wavelength,
>     Something was lost in equation 2,
>     equation 2 and 3 should be in same style.
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> Reviewer: 3
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> Recommendation: This paper is probably publishable, but should be reviewed again in revised form before it is accepted.
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> Comments:
> Wu and co-workers report on the synthesis of SnO2 nanoparticles and their catalytic activity. This work seems of potential interest, however a few minor issues need to be resolved first.
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> 1. Some work needs to be done to polish the english, but this is purely superficial at this stage. There are some major grammatical errors in the abstract.
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> 2. XRD is used to analyse the crystal structure. The authors say they used the Scherrer equation to determine crystal size, but did not mention about what the sizes were? I couldnt find the analysis or results in the main text. More work is needed on interpreting the XRD data. Lots of effort has been put in to make the large number of samples and collect this data, it would be a shame not to get more out of it. There may be some information in the supporting material, but some mention of the diameter of the nanoparticles from XRD should be in the main text.
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> 3. The TEM is difficult to see. The micrographs are low mag and contain a lot of superfluous material. Some higher magnification images should be taken to show individual crystal sizes and lattice structure. The micrographs are too small, they need to be larger. Too many are crammed into one figure. I cannot see any difference between the samples at this low mag.
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> 4. The authors say that for the catalytic degradation the blanks experiments show that degradation of RhB is negligible without UV irradiation or the SnO2 nanoparticles. However, it is well known that RhB degrades under intense UV light. I would like to see the authors incorporate another plot in figure 5 that actually shows real data of the degradation of RhB in the absence of the SNO2 nanoparticles at the pH ranges used. It is important to clarify the effect of SnO2 particles on the degradation by using a suitable background measurement.
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> This work has potential, but a few minor issues need tightening up before publication. Once these have been addressed this manuscript would be suitable for publication.
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ljl1205(金币+5,VIP+0): 9-13 11:50
Reviewer 2
1. “Although they studied several factors that influence the shape, size and crystalline structure of the obtained nanoparticles, no investigation of functional properties were reported, no even for those samples with well-crystallized, monodispersed structure and anisotropic like Figure 3F, 6A,B,C and 8C. Not to mention that the residues from PVP thermal decomposition affect the catalytic properties of nanoparticles, making the comparison inadequate.”

In this work, two representative functionalities, for example magnetic property and catalytic ability in CO oxidation of hematite nanodiscs have been investigated, as discussed in Section 3.4. However, this work focuses on the controllably synthesis of hematite nanostructures with different shapes and sizes. As correctly pointed out by this referee, it only has a limited effort in exploring the functional properties. To avoid possible confusion or misunderstanding, the title of this paper has been changed to “Synthesis and Growth of Hematite Nanodiscs through a Facile Hydrothermal Approach”.

2. “Figure 2C,D can not be seen.”

This may be caused by the poor resolution of the PDF converted image. In order to see clearly, the resolution of the two figures has been improved in the revised version.
3. “Figure 9A,B are not clear enough.”
To see clearly, the line style and point size in Figure 9A,B have been improved in the revised version.
Reviewer 5
1. “P2L11 states that some methods of the published studies focused on the thermal decomposition of organometallic precursors, which limit their applications. But, there is no reasons provided. Brief mention of the reasons is necessary.”

As suggested, the reason is briefly mentioned in Paragraph 1, page 2, as below:

“For example, the iron oxide nanoparticles obtained by thermal decomposition in non-polar solvents are difficult directly to be transferred into aqueous solution due to the surface coated surfactants. The removal of such surfactants may lead to particle aggregation, and hence affect the covalently binding other surfactants such as poly(ethylene)glycol (PEG) spacer with hydrophilic groups for further dextran coating that is targeted toward solid tumor treatment (Sonvico et al. 2005). ”


2. “In Fig. 1 and Fig. 6, the author should give the measurement method (histogram figure of size distribution) and explain the measured procedure. In addition, for Fig. 4, the author gives the range of size distributions. I want to know the measured procedure”

The data for particle size distribution were collected based on TEM analysis, and also assisted by the Image Processing and Analysis Program (ImageJ 1.37v, 2006). This has been added in the revised version in Section 2.2 Characterization (Page 4).


3. “P6L6, the author think that the nucleation is fast while the subsequent growth seems slow in this synthesis process by heating for different time. This explanation is not convincible. I don't see this point from Fig. 3. The nucleation and the growth may be overlapped each other. The author may wish to describe the "burst-nucleation"mechanism.”

As suggested, the nucleation and growth mechanism of the iron oxide particles is re-discussed in the revised version (Page 6), as below:

“This result suggested that the nucleation is fast, namely, the so-called “burst-nucleation” happens in this reaction system. Despite the nucleation and the growth may be overlapped each other at the initial stage, the particle size increases with time could be clearly observed after 5 min (Fig. 3B-F). The fast nucleation and the subsequent slow growth to be well-crystallized nanodiscs could also be confirmed by the relationship between reaction time and particle sizes, as described in Fig. 4, in which the data were collected and compared on the basis of TEM images obtained at different times. This is different from the nucleation delayed mechanism occurred in the formation of iron oxide nanodiscs through the thermal decomposition of Fe(CO)5 precursor in non-polar solvent (Casual et al. 2006).”
4. “P9L28, "Seen from the TEM images (Fig. 6, panels A-C), some of particles overlapped as pointed by arrows, suggesting that disclike structure may be formed, as discussed above". Some of particles overlapped are universal situations in TEM images of nanoparticles. The point should not be used as a proof of the formation of disclike structure.”
As suggested, the sentence "Seen from the TEM images (Fig. 6, panels A-C),… as discussed above." has been deleted, and the arrows have been removed from Fig. 6B in the revised version.
5. “I don't see the irregular particles with diameter of 5-10 nm in Fig. 7A (a lack of resolution). It must be re-worked.”
Done as suggested.
6. “P11, "at a very low concentration of [Fe3+] (e.g., 0.038 mM), hollow nanostructures were prepared". It is very interesting. Can the author give the reason or the formation mechanism.”
As suggested, the possible mechanism to the formation of hollow nanostructures has been discussed in the revised version (Paragraph 1, Page 12), as below:

“Further observation from the magnification TEM image in the insert of Fig. 8F reveals that the hollow or porous structures are composed of small particles, which possible self-assemble into big spheres with pores through the electrostatic and/or van der Waals forces. The formation process is similar to the literature, in which the porous hematite nanostructures (e.g., rings, tubes, porous rods) were prepared through template-free solution-based synthesis, and the investigators addressed the key role of the ions in the formation of  (Wen et al. 2005; Wu et, and Cl, SO42hollow/porous structures, such as H2PO4  ions probablyal. 2006; Jia et al. 2007; Gou et al. 2008). In this case, the Cl play an important role of in the formation of such nanostructures. However, the nature is still not clear. Therefore, more work needs to be performed for understanding the hollow structures.”
7. “The author should insert a space between numbers and units. Such as page 8(ionic radius 1.8Å. Similar corrections should also be done in the paper.”
Done as suggested.
8. “P7, "by Casula et al (2006)-", Page9, "literature.18", Page 13, "temperatures (Zhang et al. 2004).30 ". These mistakes of format should be corrected in the paper.”
Done as suggested.
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14楼2009-09-13 09:06:06
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google8385

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Reviewer: 1
The paper provides some good information regarding the XXXX. The paper is of reasonably broad international interest and should be of interest to readers of XXXX. Some sections of the text need rephrasing as they are a little unclear as they stand and there are a number of points that need to be addressed before publication. These are as follows:

Reviewer: 2
This ms describes a study of XXXX in XXXX and their use in XXXX. It is an extension of similar work done by the two lead authors on mode and will be of interest to geologists in general and marine geologists in particular. The ms is generally well written and easy to follow, although there are some typos and confusing sentences. There are a few problems with the reference list. This, however, does not negate the findings.
15楼2009-09-13 09:18:55
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ljl1205(金币+5,VIP+0): 9-13 11:51
Reviewer #1: Dear Authors:

This paper describes the precise and accurate thermodynamic quantities for C6H5COONa and hence it is worth publishing.  However, it should be revised in a few points below.

1. In Abstract, text, and Table 5, fHm°[C6H5COONa, s] = -(642.559 ± 0.635) kJ mol-1 should be corrected to be fHm°[C6H5COONa, s] = -(642.56 ± 0.64) kJ mol-1.

2. In text, rHm° = - (30.379 ± 0.152) kJ mol-1 should be corrected to be rHm° = -(30.38 ± 0.15) kJ mol-1.

3. In Tables 4 and 5, {CH3COONa(s)} + solution A' = - (10.931 ± 0.113) kJ mol-1 should be corrected to be {CH3COONa(s)} + solution A' = - (10.93 ± 0.11) kJ mol-1.

If they are corrected, this paper will be accepted.
16楼2009-09-13 09:20:47
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ganxiumin

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暂时还在等待审稿意见呢!!期待能早点看到,呵呵!
17楼2009-09-13 09:23:24
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dongfangjian

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Reviewer #1: This is a rather good paper dealing with the theoretical study of the electronic structure and elastic properties of the ternary carbide Ti4GaC3.  The work has been done competently and merits publication in SSC.  Two points could be somewhat extended and discussed before publication proceeds.

The study is a bit too restrictive.  The 413 stoichiometry is observed with other elements (Ta4AlC3, V4AlC3-x.).  I would have liked to see a comparison and a discussion with Ti4GaC3.  What about the elastic properties when we play with different elements (different electron counts per formula)?  What about the electronic structure difference?  Some phases are carbon deficient.  Why?

Similarly, the comparison with Ti2GaC could be extended by giving and commenting its electronic structure.

Minor points.
The drawing of Ti4GaC3 (Fig. 1) is not that clear.  We hardly see the octahedral surrounding of C atoms.
18楼2009-09-13 09:59:27
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今天来灌水

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这个好,帮顶!我也来一个!

2009年1月16号投稿,
materials letters,选日本编辑Prof. J. Hojo - Nano-composites, Composites, Sol-gel preparation  很多虫虫说这个编辑很慢,其实我觉得挺快的!

View Letter
Date: Mar 09, 2009
Dear Professor ***,
Following our acknowledgement of your paper, I have now received the referee's report, which is appended below. As you will see, modifications are required to the manuscript before it can be accepted.
If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript.
To submit a revision, go to http://ees.elsevier.com/mlblue/ and log in as an Author.  You will see a menu item call 'Submission Requiring Revision'.  You will find your submission record there. When submitting your revised manuscript, please ensure that you upload the source files (e.g. Word). Uploading a PDF file at this stage will create delays should your manuscript be finally accepted for publication. If your revised submission does not include the source files, we will contact you to request them.
Yours sincerely,
Prof. Junichi Hojo
Editor
Materials Letters
Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports the synthesis of *** nanocrystals in a **** matrix. In general, the results are interesting and important; however, quite a few issues in this manuscript need to be first addressed before it can considered suitable for publishing in Materials Letters. The issues are listed in the following:
1.Since one of the key issues of this concept is the incorporation of M(II) into polymer matrix by coordination bonds. Do the authors have any ideas to prove the formation of coordination bond between M(II) and **ol group?
2.The content organization of this manuscript is poor and further improvement is needed. For example, the scheme used to clarify the authors' concept should be addressed early, either in the introduction or in the results/discussion part, but not at the end of the manuscript. This will help readers understand the manuscript in a better way.  
3.In general, the style of the whole text should be justified, instead of being aligned left.
4.Detailed information of the chemicals such as commercial source, purity grade, with/without further treatment, should be mentioned in the experimental part of this manuscript.
5.The style of "?C" in line 12 of page 4 is not consistent with the text.
6.Reference is needed to support the assignment of the diffraction indexes to crystalline MS.
7.In line 6 of page 5, it should be M instead of cM.
8.There is a gap in the title of x-axis of Figure 1. It needs to be removed.
9.Journal abbreviation name should be used in ref. 2.
Finally, there are a few places in the manuscript where the English needs to be improved.
For example, instead of matrice, matrix should be used in the text.
In summary, minor mandatory revisions are required for this manuscript before it can be considered suitable for publishing in the Materials Letters.


Reviewer #2: The paper is entitled 'Morphology and size control of******** matrices'. But I can't find out any words or sentences about the control on the morphology and size. The title and contents didn't match. It can't be accepted unless the authors confirm what they are talking about.

编辑给了大修,修改稿改了题目

View Letter

Date: Mar 30, 2009  
To: "
From: Junichi Hojo mlett@****
Subject: Your Submission MLBLUE-D-**R1  
Ref.:  Ms. No. MLBLUE-D***3R1
A facile ****matrix
Materials Letters

Dear Professor

I am pleased to tell you that your work has now been accepted for publication in Materials Letters.  

Thank you for submitting your work to this journal.

With kind regards

Prof. Junichi Hojo
Editor
Materials Letters

[ Last edited by 今天来灌水 on 2009-9-13 at 10:14 ]
19楼2009-09-13 10:11:42
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nandi2212

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我的最近还没有,不好意思!
20楼2009-09-13 11:48:34
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