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Thank you for submitting your manuscript to Optics and Laser Technology. I have completed the review of your manuscript and a summary is appended below. The reviewers recommend reconsideration of your paper following major revision. I invite you to resubmit your manuscript after addressing all reviewer comments.

When resubmitting your manuscript, please carefully consider all issues mentioned in the reviewers' comments, outline every change made point by point, and provide suitable rebuttals for any comments not addressed.



Comments from the editors and reviewers:
-Reviewer 1

General comments:

In this manuscript, the weld pool behaviors and ripple formation in dissimilar welding under pulsed laser have been studied. A three-dimensional transient computational model has been developed to study this complex problem. The calculated results have been verified by experimental results. The manuscript is worth publishing, however I would like the authors to consider the following points before final acceptance.

Special comments:

(1)     The English needs to be improved throughout the paper.
(2)     If the cross-section shown in Fig.7 is the same place as shown in Fig.5 or not?

(3)     P4.Line1 ¡°It is assumed that the mixing of two dissimilar materials did not occur at the process of keyhole formation¡±, what are the reasons that the authors put forward this assumption?

(4)     Explanation

of Az2 in equation (3) is missed.
(5)     The calculated niobium concentration has been compared with the experimental result, but the explanation of the differences exist is omitted.



-Reviewer 2

  - 1. Totally, the content of this article is good and new, relevant to laser technology and mechanical engineering.

2. I think more explanation and discussion of the results and little bit more analysis is needed.

3. More figures and better quality of the given figures should be provided as the three-dimensional model is done, and also table of the results and supplementary data should be brought more fully.

4. Some basic information of the paper are referred to the references that it is better included in the text briefly.
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