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psyuan

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[求助] 求改写润色一句话。

However, osteoclast activity requires the activation of the multinucleated cells in order to establish the cytoskeletal arrangements for adhering to the mineralized surface. It can be observed when some bisphosphonates, like sodium alendronate, are administered to animals or to cultures. Indeed, after alendronate treatment the osteoclast precursores are recruited, proliferated, and  multinucleated, but they are not activated.
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2楼: Originally posted by gerryangel at 2016-04-13 16:18:57
Indeed, after alendronate treatment the osteoclast precursores are recruited, proliferated, and  multinucleated, but they are not activated
英文中很少出现连续的谓语,汉语中我们可以说:我骑着车子,拎 ...

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fjtony163: 金币+1, 鼓励应助 2016-04-30 14:01:16
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Indeed, after alendronate treatment the osteoclast precursores are recruited, proliferated, and  multinucleated, but they are not activated
英文中很少出现连续的谓语,汉语中我们可以说:我骑着车子,拎着包,打着伞去买菜。骑,拎,打,都是可以在一句话中出现的。你这句中的recruited, proliferated, multinucleated连续用不合适。
可写为:Indeed, after alendronate treatment ,recruitment, proliferation and multinucleation of osteoclast precursores were observed, .....
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