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The reason may be that due to the addition of the PDMS, the pore size of silica becomes very small, resulting in an increasing number of the interstitial holes with large size which are formed between silica particles
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xfgzju: 金币+5 2015-12-11 22:38:35
the reason maybe that PDMS added, so the proe size of silica becomes very small, as a result, the number of large size interstial holes increasing, which are formed between silica particle.
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xfgzju: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1 2015-12-11 22:38:31
你看看这怎么样?对结果进行讨论用一般现在时,添加PDMS已经是过去了,用一般过去时。对于英语翻译,应该把需要强调的东西作为主要部分,其余的作为定于或状语修饰它。删掉重复或多余的东西!
This is probably due to the fact that the pore size of silica is smaller than before while PDMS was added, which is helpful to form more interstitial holes with large size between silica particles.
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