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首先,这个审稿意见以前已经求助过大家,多谢大家给予的帮助。经过和老板商量,老板认为我文章的口气太大,我们研究的目的只是对结构在冲击载荷下性能的探索,并不是给出设计理念,况且实验数据也不够,根本达不到给出设计方法。因而我就将文章中关于设计理念和提出设计方法的地方删啦,引言当然是另写啦!实验的统计结果就作为文章中的讨论部分,作为分析结果。同时我也根据第一个审稿人的意见,用别人的数据对结果进行了确认。
再做了上面的修改后,应该怎样回答审稿人的意见,请大家给点建议,先谢啦!

Reviewer #1: This paper studies the resistance of the reinforced concrete structures experimentally.   As a result, the authors propose a design procedure.   However, the proposed design curve seems to be defined as the statistical average of experimental results.   The reviewer wonders that such a design curve without any safety margins is acceptable.   The authors are expected to make some explanations about the applicability of the proposal as an design concept.   In addition, this paper has a lot of editorial mistakes.   The authors are also expected to fix them.



Reviewer #2: Clarify if the paper presents a design concept or only the experimental results after a statistical analysis. Verify and standardize the entire document including the technical English.
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