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[求助] 论文初审意见回来，但没有看懂是什么意思，请大家帮忙指点个下，谢谢！已有6人参与

论文初审意见回来，但没有看懂是什么意思，不知道该怎么处理，请大家帮忙指点个下，谢谢！
Reviewer #1:
In the submitted manuscript the authors report a systematic  study about the structures, stabilities
and electronic properties of several small pure and binary clusters composed by Ag and Cr.


The strategy followed, with respect to properties and indices of stability etc
is well established the last decade by numerous studies devoted in small and medium sized clusters.
The presentation of the obtained results is clear and helps the reader to follow the reported results.

*Everything would be fine if the clusters considered were of trivial electronic structure*

The systems chosen are very hard to treat cases.
Some of those bear electronic structures which cannot be treated by a monodeterminal method.

Especially the smallest members of this work (dimers and trimmers) are notorious in the community about their ease of treating.

For instance Cr2 is a very well known case of a dimer bearing large multi- referential character accounting to 47% of the total wave function.

I performed personally the T1 diagnostic as implemented in G09 (the same goes for g03) using the same geometry and basis set used in the submitted study and I found that the respective quantity is more than 2 times larger than the proposed limit of (0.02)

The same goes for some of the three-atomic systems presented.


Maybe the authors are aware of this essential problem since as it is clarified in the text
this study focuses more on the obtained trends than in presenting values that could be compared to the literature.

*However, it is also true that reliable trends can be only obtained from reliable methods*.

For this reason I cannot propose this paper to be accepted in its current form, even if the trends revealed might prove similar to those obtained from
more suitable methods.

In a future attempt on such systems the authors should check the  multi-referential character of each cluster plus the stability of each the wavefuctions used.
Some of the larger clusters considered may not suffer from the effects described above, thus, the obtained results might prove reliable.

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感谢参与，应助指数 +1
应该是对现在的文章结果不是很满意，需要修改，将审稿人的问题仔细就出来回答就行了，好像是需要其他的方式进一步证明文章的一些结论，祝好运！

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1、审稿人认为楼主的表征，存在问题，不可靠；
Some of those bear electronic structures which cannot be treated by a monodeterminal method.
2、有些数据不可靠
I performed personally the T1 diagnostic as implemented in G09 (the same goes for g03) using the same geometry and basis set used in the submitted study and I found that the respective quantity is more than 2 times larger than the proposed limit of (0.02)。
3、楼主需要进一步做的工作（做了也不保证接受）
In a future attempt on such systems the authors should check the  multi-referential character of each cluster plus the stability of each the wavefuctions used.
Some of the larger clusters considered may not suffer from the effects described above, thus, the obtained results might prove reliable.
4、最后还有另外的审稿意见在 decision letter里。打开相应的链接看看。
总体来讲，可以认为审稿人对楼主的工作基本持否定的态度，因此在此期刊发表的前景比较不乐观，建议先修改后再短时间内观察看看，不行立即他投。
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2楼: Originally posted by sigma at 2014-04-18 17:38:20
太专业了，就看懂了据稿那句话。反正就是因为一些原因据了你的稿，如果修改建议怎样怎样。
编辑是给你大修还是据了？

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