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solid_base

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[求助] 修改稿回稿后,这种情况悲剧的可能性大么?大家帮忙分析谢谢 已有2人参与

修改稿投回去以后,编辑的回信,请大家帮忙瞧瞧  悲剧的可能性大么?谢谢

Dear Dr. xxx,

While I am satisfied with your response to technical questions, I find some awkwardness in the English. For example, in the title "solvothermally synthesis" should be "solvothermal synthesis"; "good catalytic activities" should be "good catalytic activity". In the first paragraph of Introduction: "Acid and base catalysis have been paid..." should either be "Acid and base catalysts have been paid..." or "Acid and base catalysis has been paid...". "...because of their coverage of ...": perhaps "coverage" should be "importance". Second sentence of Intro: "which result from solid the drawbacks" makes no sense. Perhaps "solid" should be deleted. I am sure there are more problems in the remaining text.

Please have someone more fluent in English edit the manuscript. If you do not have access to a fluent English speaker, you might consider a copy-editor for-hire such as

http://webshop.elsevier.com/languageediting/

Please make revisions as you deem appropriate. But if I am not satisfied with the English of the next version, I will reject the manuscript.
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好好修改语法,改好了就没问题。语言改的让编辑不满意就会悲剧。
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solid_base

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2楼: Originally posted by adayaday at 2013-12-31 17:45:57
就是英语问题,好好修改语法盒表达,改好了就没问题。语言改的让编辑不满意就会悲剧。加油,成功的机会很大,实在不行花点钱修改。

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