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Lopemann

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10楼: Originally posted by polo_he at 2013-12-31 14:27:16
i think the legacy should not give others freely.
when you happen to make a dicision, even small, you should take it seriously.
i am always upset whether it was good for Australian politics or not ...

Mate. it's good that you are willing to give it a go.
I will be picking up your errors now

The first sentence, normally we don't say "we think...not"
we use "we don't think"instead.
In addition, I didn't quite get it when you say "give others freely"
If you are confident with your writing, then paraphrase it. If you are not sure, just leave it there unchanged.
I would say "I don't think this legacy should be treated lightly."

The second sentence, though you changed the meaning of my original sentence, it's ultimate goal to get every sentence error-free. I would say "when you are about to make a decision, no matter how small the decision is, you should treat it seriously."

The third sentence. You didn't get the meaning of "upset"right.
I would say "It's hard for people to tell whether he made a positive or negative contribution in Australian politics progression."

Hope you can come here more often and write more often.
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polo_he

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many tks. i will come here often.

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Lopemann

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12楼: Originally posted by polo_he at 2014-01-01 07:19:06
many tks. i will come here often.

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Lopemann: 金币+4, haha your version is quite good! 2014-01-01 20:57:59
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Lopemann

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14楼: Originally posted by zhangj598 at 2014-01-01 20:56:34
The legacy should be dealt with seriously.

He got stuck in moving forward.

You just cannot tell whether he is an angel or a demon for Australian politics.

Your English is good

Maybe you can consider to be an expert here.
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Thanks for sharing! 2014-01-02 07:54:34
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-02 07:57:31
He is not sure which decision is better for him,

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17楼: Originally posted by 菜鸟2012 at 2014-01-02 07:23:57
He is not sure which decision is better for him,

It's error free but still somewhat unclear.

When it's more descriptive, probably you have better chance to receive a higher mark.

He is stuck in the middle when it comes to decision making, because it's hard for him to tell which way is better for him to go.
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Lopemann: 金币+4, Alright...next time I will make it clearer...P.S. your paraphrase is good. 2014-01-04 08:44:56
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:44:59
YOURS:We shouldn't treat this legacy too casually.
He is not sure which decision to make.
It's hard to tell if he helps or drags the leg of Australian politics.
your setence was so short and of little context to offer more details and information, which could cause misunderstanding.
my version: Heritage needs serious treatment.
He was boggled to decide what to do.
It puzzels us to judge whether he makes contribution or demage to Australian politics.
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在自己没有翅膀的肩上，背负了真实和梦想。
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