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Lopemann

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[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice two

Today our sentences are:
We shouldn't treat this legacy too casually.
He is not sure which decision to make.
It's hard to tell if he helps or drags the leg of Australian politics.

You can choose one of them or all of them to paraphrase. Up to you.

All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing"
Feel free to subscribe it.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

I will give you guys a sentence or sentences on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you want.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.


My translation:

This is not a legacy to be treated lightly.

He is tied between two horses walking in different directions, unsure of which rope to cut.

It’s a tough call as to whether he was a builder or a destroyer in progressive Australian politics.


[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-2 at 06:21 ]
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Thanks for sharing! 2014-01-02 07:54:34
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-02 07:57:31
He is not sure which decision is better for him,

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Lopemann: 金币+2, Try to make it longer and descriptive :p 2013-12-31 08:22:55
He is not sure what decision to make.
you will be the best some day
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Lopemann

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2楼: Originally posted by kongkeke at 2013-12-31 08:14:16
He is not sure what decision to make.

haha there could be some minor grammar mistakes.
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Good grammar. 2013-12-31 11:07:03
He is not sure how to make decision.
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