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Lopemann

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[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice two

Today our sentences are:
We shouldn't treat this legacy too casually.
He is not sure which decision to make.
It's hard to tell if he helps or drags the leg of Australian politics.

You can choose one of them or all of them to paraphrase. Up to you.

All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing"
Feel free to subscribe it.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

I will give you guys a sentence or sentences on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you want.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.

My translation:

This is not a legacy to be treated lightly.

He is tied between two horses walking in different directions, unsure of which rope to cut.

It’s a tough call as to whether he was a builder or a destroyer in progressive Australian politics.


[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-2 at 06:21 ]
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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-31 12:06:35
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8楼: Originally posted by cyy008 at 2013-12-31 11:31:21
Got it.
Wait for yours....

This is not a legacy to be treated lightly.

He is tied between two horses walking in different directions, unsure of which rope to cut.

It’s a tough call as to whether he was a builder or a destroyer in progressive Australian politics.

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Lopemann: 金币+4, haha your version is quite good! 2014-01-01 20:57:59
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-01 20:58:02
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Thanks for sharing! 2014-01-02 07:54:34
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-02 07:57:31
He is not sure which decision is better for him,

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Lopemann: 金币+4, Alright...next time I will make it clearer...P.S. your paraphrase is good. 2014-01-04 08:44:56
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:44:59
YOURS:We shouldn't treat this legacy too casually.
He is not sure which decision to make.
It's hard to tell if he helps or drags the leg of Australian politics.
your setence was so short and of little context to offer more details and information, which could cause misunderstanding.
my version: Heritage needs serious treatment.
He was boggled to decide what to do.
It puzzels us to judge whether he makes contribution or demage to Australian politics.
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Try to make it longer and descriptive :p 2013-12-31 08:22:55
He is not sure what decision to make.
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2楼: Originally posted by kongkeke at 2013-12-31 08:14:16
He is not sure what decision to make.

haha there could be some minor grammar mistakes.
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Good grammar. 2013-12-31 11:07:03
He is not sure how to make decision.
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4楼: Originally posted by snowkelly at 2013-12-31 11:00:06
He is not sure how to make decision.

Alright it's error-free but maybe more details are better.
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Lopemann: 金币+3, Good try. 2013-12-31 11:28:44
We should take this legacy seriously.
He hesitates to make a decision.

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6楼: Originally posted by cyy008 at 2013-12-31 11:17:57
We should take this legacy seriously.
He hesitates to make a decision.

The first sentence is good.

The second one, maybe you changed the meaning a bit.
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7楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-31 11:28:34
The first sentence is good.

The second one, maybe you changed the meaning a bit....

Got it.
Wait for yours.
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i think the legacy should not give others freely.
when you happen to make a dicision, even small, you should take it seriously.
i am always upset whether it was good for Australian politics or not that i have done.

if there have grammer error above, pls help me check out, many tks.
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