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[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice one

Today our sentence is:
People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition.

All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing"
Feel free to subscribe it.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

I will give you guys a sentence on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you all.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.

My translation:

While labels state that supplements are only useful if out diet is deficient, many of us still reach for the vitamin bottle as added insurance in our quest for health.


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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-28 10:35:41
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7楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 10:19:09
abusing of supplements are common within people who have adequate nutrition.

There are prevalent beliefs and confidence in food supplements (complementary medicines) even among people with abundant food choice.

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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-29 08:24:17
While labels state that supplements are only useful if out diet is deficient, many of us still reach for the vitamin bottle as added insurance in our quest for health.

This is probably a full marks answer (there is no such a thing called official answer)

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Lopemann: 金币+4, You answer looks pretty good. 2013-12-30 06:43:06
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-30 06:46:24
"People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition."
my version:
Even if individuals are in fairly balanced nutirtion, they are still taking extender which mostly serves as placebo.
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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-28 08:09:19
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I will give you guys a sentence on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you all.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.
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who is "they" ?
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3楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 08:36:20
who is "they" ?

"people"

Please post your version here.
Just one sentence.
Paraphrase "People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition."
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Lopemann: 金币+1, haha a clever way doing it. You can tear down the whole sentence and re-establish it. I will give you an example later. 2013-12-28 08:41:19
though having enough nutrition, people are still using supplements.
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Lopemann: 金币+1, haha make it a bit longer and add more details. 2013-12-28 10:08:10
People use exceeding supplement.

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A little bit more.
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Lopemann: 金币+1, haha abusing is not accurate. You can say overdose but the meaning being changed. 2013-12-28 10:21:14
abusing of supplements are common within people who have adequate nutrition.
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8楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-28 10:27:10
There is diversity of beliefs and confidence in food supplements (complementary medicines) even among people with abundant food choice....

yeah, the paraphrasing is very native, i can feel it. but it's difficult for me to think in this way.
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9楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 10:30:20
yeah, the paraphrasing is very native, i can feel it. but it's difficult for me to think in this way....

same thing actually

people use supplements=There are prevalent beliefs and confidence in food supplements among people

people have enough nutrition=people with abundant food choice

Isn't it the same?

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