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[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice one

Today our sentence is:
People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition.

All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing"
Feel free to subscribe it.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

I will give you guys a sentence on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you all.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.

My translation:

While labels state that supplements are only useful if out diet is deficient, many of us still reach for the vitamin bottle as added insurance in our quest for health.


[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-2 at 06:20 ]
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3楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 08:36:20
who is "they" ?

"people"

Please post your version here.
Just one sentence.
Paraphrase "People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition."
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I will give you guys a sentence on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you all.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.
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who is "they" ?
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Lopemann: 金币+1, haha a clever way doing it. You can tear down the whole sentence and re-establish it. I will give you an example later. 2013-12-28 08:41:19
though having enough nutrition, people are still using supplements.
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