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Lopemann

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9楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 10:30:20
yeah, the paraphrasing is very native, i can feel it. but it's difficult for me to think in this way....

Sorry I realize "diversity"is not good in this case.
It's just being changed.
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10楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-28 10:35:09
same thing actually

people use supplements=There are prevalent beliefs and confidence in food supplements among people

people have enough nutrition=people with abundant food choice

Isn ...

yes, they believe in supplements,thinks it's good for health. so they still use supplements, even the food are adequate in nowadays.

your sentence reveal something, i suppose.
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12楼: Originally posted by 00waterh at 2013-12-28 15:46:47
yes, they believe in supplements,thinks it's good for health. so they still use supplements, even the food are adequate in nowadays.

your sentence reveal something, i suppose....

You are with attention to detail, which is good.

I did a bit research about complementary medicines when I was studying pharmacy. Basically CMs do no good to us unless we were asked to take them.

But in this theme, I just want to motivate people to do some English practice.
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00waterh: 回帖置顶 2013-12-29 09:19:39
Lopemann: 取消置顶 2013-12-29 12:39:57
Hope more people could participate.
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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-29 08:24:17
While labels state that supplements are only useful if out diet is deficient, many of us still reach for the vitamin bottle as added insurance in our quest for health.

This is probably a full marks answer (there is no such a thing called official answer)

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15楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-29 08:24:12
While labels state that supplements are only useful if out diet is deficient, many of us still reach for the vitamin bottle as added insurance in our quest for health.

This is probably a full mark ...

your answer is near to the official answer
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Lopemann: 金币+4, You answer looks pretty good. 2013-12-30 06:43:06
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-30 06:46:24
"People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition."
my version:
Even if individuals are in fairly balanced nutirtion, they are still taking extender which mostly serves as placebo.
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17楼: Originally posted by talkthisover at 2013-12-30 00:19:05
"People are still using supplements though they have enough nutrition."
my version:
Even if individuals are in fairly balanced nutirtion, they are still taking extender which mostly serve ...

Good paraphrase.

I'm not sure if extender is interchangeable with supplements, given that food supplement is kinda a technical term in health related subjects.
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18楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-30 06:46:21
Good paraphrase.

I'm not sure if extender is interchangeable with supplements, given that food supplement is kinda a technical term in health related subjects.

...

extender is chemical term.(^_-)-☆

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Lopemann: 金币+2, Maybe you need something after "fill" coz people might get confused. 2014-01-05 09:10:50
although people can abtain adequate nutrition from daily food, they still buy some supplements to fill.
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