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I cut my hand on a piece of glass 与 my hand was cut by a piece of glass 为啥 后面那句就成中式英语了呢？ 求解释 |
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"They are both ok, the latter is not Chinglish, it just happens to have the same sentence order as a Chinese sentence. The latter is passive voice, and in today's English, passive voice is normally not encrouged. Passive voice happens a lot in German, and in English, there is a risk of confusing people about your real meaning. "I cut my hand on a piece of glass" is an active voice, it's ok, but it could also be rearranged into "A piece of glass cut my hand", which is a mroe direct active voice. Remember, a more direct active voice is always preferred. Cheers" from hutopia |
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