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Neither of them is native English, as far as I can see.

I know the first sentence is in lyrics, but I am not sure if it is error free.
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3Â¥2013-12-13 15:00:13
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3Â¥: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-13 15:00:13
Neither of them is native English, as far as I can see.

I know the first sentence is in lyrics, but I am not sure if it is error free.

so what's your choice£¿  the native English.......
4Â¥2013-12-13 15:07:20
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2Â¥: Originally posted by ·ÂþÂþQ at 2013-12-13 14:53:24
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5¥: Originally posted by 밢ë at 2013-12-13 15:10:04
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no Chinese here
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6Â¥2013-12-13 15:35:06
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4¥: Originally posted by 밢ë at 2013-12-13 15:07:20
so what's your choice£¿  the native English..........

I cut my hand with a piece of glass.
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7Â¥2013-12-13 15:41:20
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6Â¥: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-13 15:35:06
no Chinese here...

I see~~~
8Â¥2013-12-13 15:54:25
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"They are both ok, the latter is not Chinglish, it just happens to have the same sentence order as a Chinese sentence. The latter is passive voice, and in today's English, passive voice is normally not encrouged. Passive voice happens a lot in German, and in English, there is a risk of confusing people about your real meaning.

"I cut my hand on a piece of glass" is an active voice, it's ok, but it could also be rearranged into "A piece of glass cut my hand", which is a mroe direct active voice.

Remember, a more direct active voice is always preferred.

Cheers"
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9Â¥2013-12-14 22:51:43
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Personal view, "A piece of glass cut my hand", and "my hand was cut by a piece of glass" are better than "I cut my hand on a piece of glass".
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