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I cut my hand on a piece of glass 与 my hand was cut by a piece of glass
为啥 后面那句就成中式英语了呢？ 求解释
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被动语态不对吧！！！
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Neither of them is native English, as far as I can see.

I know the first sentence is in lyrics, but I am not sure if it is error free.
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3楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-13 15:00:13
Neither of them is native English, as far as I can see.

I know the first sentence is in lyrics, but I am not sure if it is error free.

so what's your choice？  the native English.......
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2楼: Originally posted by 路漫漫Q at 2013-12-13 14:53:24
被动语态不对吧！！！

嗯~~~好像是这样， 我才是主谋，玻璃只是工具~~~
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5楼: Originally posted by 毛阿毛 at 2013-12-13 15:10:04
嗯~~~好像是这样， 我才是主谋，玻璃只是工具~~~...

no Chinese here
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4楼: Originally posted by 毛阿毛 at 2013-12-13 15:07:20
so what's your choice？  the native English..........

I cut my hand with a piece of glass.
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6楼: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-13 15:35:06
no Chinese here...

I see~~~
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"They are both ok, the latter is not Chinglish, it just happens to have the same sentence order as a Chinese sentence. The latter is passive voice, and in today's English, passive voice is normally not encrouged. Passive voice happens a lot in German, and in English, there is a risk of confusing people about your real meaning.

"I cut my hand on a piece of glass" is an active voice, it's ok, but it could also be rearranged into "A piece of glass cut my hand", which is a mroe direct active voice.

Remember, a more direct active voice is always preferred.

Cheers"
from  hutopia
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Personal view, "A piece of glass cut my hand", and "my hand was cut by a piece of glass" are better than "I cut my hand on a piece of glass".
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