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[求助] 麻烦大家帮我看下这句话,我写的对吗?急! 已有1人参与

I have been making the proposal on the topic of small-molecule these days. After finished, I will send it to you as soon as possible.
我要表达的意思是:我这段时间正在制作小分子方面的计划,做完后,我会立即把计划发给你。
大家看下我上面那句英语写的有问题吗?我总感觉after finished这个地方有点问题?
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李红艳

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个人觉得应该是: I am making the plan of small molecular aspects on this time, when I finished it, I will send it to you imediately!
have been 表示的是现在完成时
5楼2013-10-10 12:45:26
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befair

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建议:
I have been drafting a plan for work on small molecule these days and will send it to you as soon as I have it completed.
计划不是proposal,但是如果你是要说在写建议的课题,可以说 drafting a proposal for topics on small molecule ...
不能说After finished,可以说After finishing 但completing 更好些。 Having it completed 可以换成I have completed it.
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2楼2013-10-10 12:31:04
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befair

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补充:
这里说as soon as possible 不如说 as soon as I ...因为后者强调“一旦完成,马上就。。。”
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3楼2013-10-10 12:33:10
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Having it completed 可以换成I have completed it?
我原句里面没有这个啊?没看懂楼上的意思啊
还有as soon as possible 不如说 as soon as I 这个怎么写呢,楼上的能完整的写下吗
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